酷我-北美枫

[蓝冰]

The Cocoon

She has fled
nobody knows
where she is

Asking sky
threre is no answer
but that cloud
waft in the breezes

Asking breezes
there is no sound
but that breath
is round with speech

Asking the old mulberry
there is no response
but a half of cocoon
hangs at the leaves

A sparrow sings spring song
on the branch

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The Cocoon

She has fled
nobody knows
where she is

Asking sky
threre is no answer
but that cloud
waft in the breezes

Asking breezes
there is no sound
but that breath
is round with speech

Asking the old mulberry
there is no response
but a half of cocoon
hangs at the leaves

A sparrow sings spring song
on the branch

[和平岛]

都开写英文诗了
我曾读过一些英文诗
后因太热衷于中文诗, 也就无暇顾及了
将来一定来写写...

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都开写英文诗了
我曾读过一些英文诗
后因太热衷于中文诗, 也就无暇顾及了
将来一定来写写...

[蓝冰]

如果你写, 相信一定很棒, 大家也可学习交流, 以助斑员们提高. 这好象也符合北美风成为东西文化交流平台的初宗1

没交学费, 不敢强求

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如果你写, 相信一定很棒, 大家也可学习交流, 以助斑员们提高. 这好象也符合北美风成为东西文化交流平台的初宗1

没交学费, 不敢强求

[何兆龙]

There are some spelling mistakes, which may cause misunderstanding, like:

Ansew (answer?)

respounce (response?)

In some sentences, grammar has room to improve too, like:

"inquired", past participle in the beginning normally stands for passive voice.

This may not be a bad poem if it is written in Chinese.

[[南音]]

There are some spelling mistakes, which may cause misunderstanding, like:

Ansew (answer?)

respounce (response?)

In some sentences, grammar has room to improve too, like:

"inquired", past participle in the beginning normally stands for passive voice.

This may not be a bad poem if it is written in Chinese.

[和平岛]

呵呵
真写的话, 要看大量的英文诗
诗歌语言, 和一般的文字, 是很不一样的

[[我还没有昵称]]

呵呵
真写的话, 要看大量的英文诗
诗歌语言, 和一般的文字, 是很不一样的

[星子]

冰冰，刚开始时，最好多用完整的句子，
短句比较难掌握，尤其在诗里。

尽量写简单的句子和意思。。。以后再写复杂的情绪。

[[ANNA]]

冰冰，刚开始时，最好多用完整的句子，
短句比较难掌握，尤其在诗里。

尽量写简单的句子和意思。。。以后再写复杂的情绪。

[蓝冰]

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[蓝冰]

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[蓝冰]

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[和平岛]

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[蓝冰]

真正的现代诗歌, 是源于西方文化的

THANKS PEACE, I GET IT

[[FAFAFA]]

真正的现代诗歌, 是源于西方文化的

THANKS PEACE, I GET IT