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帖子发表于: 星期六 五月 17, 2008 10:15 am    发表主题: Poetics of Intercourse 引用并回复



最后进行编辑的是 christine on 星期六 五月 31, 2008 9:56 am, 总计第 1 次编辑
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帖子发表于: 星期六 五月 17, 2008 10:19 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

Dislocated by ericcoliu

His face,
A map of solitude;
Her Body,
The scent of Eros.

For the detailed information regrading Dislocated and its associated Xiaoshi, please read ericcoliu's posting Two Xiaoshi: Dislocated and Longing, which is posted at http://coviews.com/viewtopic.php?t=38034
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帖子发表于: 星期六 五月 17, 2008 3:40 pm    发表主题: Re: Intercourse 引用并回复

Two contrast images dislocate the sexually charged title – Intercourse.

-- A reply from a casually committed writer who is interested in embodied writing.
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帖子发表于: 星期日 五月 18, 2008 6:40 am    发表主题: Re: Intercourse 引用并回复

let's engage in intercourse!!

myself is sculptor of
your body’s idiom:
the musician of your wrists;
the poet who is afraid
only to mistranslate

a rhythm in your hair,
(your fingertips
the way you move)
gggggggggggggggthe

painter of your voice—
beyond these elements

remarkably nothing is.…

-- E. E. Cummings
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帖子发表于: 星期一 五月 19, 2008 9:54 am    发表主题: Re: Intercourse 引用并回复

ericcoliu 写到:


let's engage in intercourse!!



Engaging in embodied intercourse in a poetic form?

ericcoliu 写到:


myself is a sculptor of
your body’s idiom
:
the musician of your wrists;
the poet who is afraid
only to mistranslate

a rhythm in your hair,
(your fingertips
the way you move)
gggggggggggggggthe

painter of your voice
beyond these elements

remarkably nothing is.…

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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.
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帖子发表于: 星期二 五月 20, 2008 10:04 am    发表主题: Re: Intercourse 引用并回复

Champagne 写到:


Two contrast images dislocate the sexually charged title – Intercourse.

-- A reply from a casually committed writer who is interested in embodied writing.


You're cute. Witty words.
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帖子发表于: 星期二 五月 20, 2008 10:05 am    发表主题: Re: Intercourse 引用并回复

ericcoliu 写到:


let's engage in intercourse!!


ericcoliu 写到:


Dislocated

His face,
A map of solitude;


The Other

He invented a face for himself.

Behind it,

he lived died and resurrected

many times.

His face now

has the wrinkles from the face.

His wrinkle have no face .

-- Octavio Paz


最后进行编辑的是 christine on 星期日 五月 25, 2008 12:32 pm, 总计第 1 次编辑
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帖子发表于: 星期三 五月 21, 2008 5:37 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

"He" once was "a committed writer / of [her] body." The story behind “ His face, / A map of solitude” took place:

Long, long ago
Her tender care –
Lustfully he thinks of it

Having held close to her breast
Was another kind of springtime
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul


最后进行编辑的是 ericcoliu on 星期三 五月 20, 2009 6:22 pm, 总计第 3 次编辑
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帖子发表于: 星期五 五月 23, 2008 2:07 pm    发表主题: Re: Intercourse 引用并回复

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舌頭那匹温暖的水獸 馴養地在小小的水族箱中 蠕動
那獸說:是的 我願意
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帖子发表于: 星期日 五月 25, 2008 12:33 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

ericcoliu 写到:


"He" once was "a committed writer / of [her] body." The story behind “ His face, / A map of solitude” took place:

Long, long ago
Her tender care –
He thinks of it passionately

Held close to her breast –
That was another kind of springtime


Springtime past. A man living in the past.

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Let's engage in intercourse poetically.

the penis completing
ggggme
rests in the opening
ggggthrobs
and its steady pulse
ggggdown there
is my second heart
ggggbeating

-- Dorothy Livesay, The Touching from The Unquiet Bed


Gee, you eroticized the intercourse we’ve engaged in so far.

The Touching is a really touching poem on feminine sexuality paired with rhythm as suggested by "throbs" and "beating."
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帖子发表于: 星期一 五月 26, 2008 12:41 pm    发表主题: Re: Poetics Of Intercourse 引用并回复

I like the title of your piece: Poetics of Intercourse, which is imaginative and provocative.

The Smell of Camphor Balls (Sudden Fiction)

Such cold and a little windy weather is kind of unusual in May. Finding the sight of you approaching me, I feel warm. You say nothing, holding my hand, and we walk off together.

Your overcoat gives off the feeble smell of camphor balls, which is carried in the air by the wind. As I lean close to your shoulder, I think: A man’s body cannot smell any better than this clean, neutral smell with few associations. The wind is blowing now. You pull me closer to your chest and still say nothing on the way home. The smell of camphor balls becomes stronger, a homey smell. Yet, I know fully: It is your home.
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帖子发表于: 星期五 五月 30, 2008 3:37 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

When Man Enters Woman by Anne Sexton (1928 - 1974, by suicide)

When man
enters woman,
like the surf biting the shore,
again and again,
and the woman opens her mouth in pleasure
and her teeth gleam
like the alphabet,
Logos appears milking a star,
and the man
inside of woman
ties a knot
so that they will
never again be separate
and the woman
climbs into a flower
and swallows its stem
and Logos appears
and unleashed their rivers.

This man,
this woman
with their double hunger,
have tried to reach through
the curtain of God
and briefly they have,
though God
in His perversity
unties the knot.
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