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christine[christine] christine作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2008-02-25 帖子: 304
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发表于: 星期六 五月 17, 2008 10:15 am 发表主题: Poetics of Intercourse |
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最后进行编辑的是 christine on 星期六 五月 31, 2008 9:56 am, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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christine[christine] christine作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
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发表于: 星期六 五月 17, 2008 10:19 am 发表主题: |
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Dislocated by ericcoliu
His face,
A map of solitude;
Her Body,
The scent of Eros.
For the detailed information regrading Dislocated and its associated Xiaoshi, please read ericcoliu's posting Two Xiaoshi: Dislocated and Longing, which is posted at http://coviews.com/viewtopic.php?t=38034 |
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Champagne[Champagne] Champagne作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2007-09-15 帖子: 394 来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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发表于: 星期六 五月 17, 2008 3:40 pm 发表主题: Re: Intercourse |
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Two contrast images dislocate the sexually charged title – Intercourse.
-- A reply from a casually committed writer who is interested in embodied writing. _________________ I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu] ericcoliu作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2007-05-29 帖子: 1393 来自: GTA, Canada
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发表于: 星期日 五月 18, 2008 6:40 am 发表主题: Re: Intercourse |
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let's engage in intercourse!!
myself is sculptor of
your body’s idiom:
the musician of your wrists;
the poet who is afraid
only to mistranslate
a rhythm in your hair,
(your fingertips
the way you move)
gggggggggggggggthe
painter of your voice—
beyond these elements
remarkably nothing is.…
-- E. E. Cummings _________________ Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul
最后进行编辑的是 ericcoliu on 星期三 五月 20, 2009 6:21 pm, 总计第 2 次编辑 |
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Champagne[Champagne] Champagne作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2007-09-15 帖子: 394 来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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发表于: 星期一 五月 19, 2008 9:54 am 发表主题: Re: Intercourse |
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ericcoliu 写到: |
let's engage in intercourse!!
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Engaging in embodied intercourse in a poetic form?
ericcoliu 写到: |
myself is a sculptor of
your body’s idiom:
the musician of your wrists;
the poet who is afraid
only to mistranslate
a rhythm in your hair,
(your fingertips
the way you move)
gggggggggggggggthe
painter of your voice—
beyond these elements
remarkably nothing is.… |
_________________ I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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christine[christine] christine作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
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发表于: 星期二 五月 20, 2008 10:04 am 发表主题: Re: Intercourse |
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Champagne 写到: |
Two contrast images dislocate the sexually charged title – Intercourse.
-- A reply from a casually committed writer who is interested in embodied writing. |
You're cute. Witty words. |
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christine[christine] christine作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
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发表于: 星期二 五月 20, 2008 10:05 am 发表主题: Re: Intercourse |
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ericcoliu 写到: |
let's engage in intercourse!!
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ericcoliu 写到: |
Dislocated
His face,
A map of solitude;
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The Other
He invented a face for himself.
Behind it,
he lived died and resurrected
many times.
His face now
has the wrinkles from the face.
His wrinkle have no face .
-- Octavio Paz
最后进行编辑的是 christine on 星期日 五月 25, 2008 12:32 pm, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu] ericcoliu作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
注册时间: 2007-05-29 帖子: 1393 来自: GTA, Canada
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发表于: 星期三 五月 21, 2008 5:37 pm 发表主题: |
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"He" once was "a committed writer / of [her] body." The story behind “ His face, / A map of solitude” took place:
Long, long ago
Her tender care –
Lustfully he thinks of it
Having held close to her breast
Was another kind of springtime _________________ Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul
最后进行编辑的是 ericcoliu on 星期三 五月 20, 2009 6:22 pm, 总计第 3 次编辑 |
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温暖的水獸[温暖的水獸] 温暖的水獸作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2008-04-23 帖子: 153 来自: 水族箱
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发表于: 星期五 五月 23, 2008 2:07 pm 发表主题: Re: Intercourse |
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deleted _________________ 舌頭那匹温暖的水獸 馴養地在小小的水族箱中 蠕動
那獸說:是的 我願意 |
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christine[christine] christine作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
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发表于: 星期日 五月 25, 2008 12:33 pm 发表主题: |
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ericcoliu 写到: |
"He" once was "a committed writer / of [her] body." The story behind “ His face, / A map of solitude” took place:
Long, long ago
Her tender care –
He thinks of it passionately
Held close to her breast –
That was another kind of springtime |
Springtime past. A man living in the past.
温暖的水獸 写到: |
Let's engage in intercourse poetically.
the penis completing
ggggme
rests in the opening
ggggthrobs
and its steady pulse
ggggdown there
is my second heart
ggggbeating
-- Dorothy Livesay, The Touching from The Unquiet Bed |
Gee, you eroticized the intercourse we’ve engaged in so far.
The Touching is a really touching poem on feminine sexuality paired with rhythm as suggested by "throbs" and "beating." |
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clair[clair] clair作品集 七品按察司 (我开始管这里的事儿了)
注册时间: 2008-03-13 帖子: 83
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发表于: 星期一 五月 26, 2008 12:41 pm 发表主题: Re: Poetics Of Intercourse |
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I like the title of your piece: Poetics of Intercourse, which is imaginative and provocative.
The Smell of Camphor Balls (Sudden Fiction)
Such cold and a little windy weather is kind of unusual in May. Finding the sight of you approaching me, I feel warm. You say nothing, holding my hand, and we walk off together.
Your overcoat gives off the feeble smell of camphor balls, which is carried in the air by the wind. As I lean close to your shoulder, I think: A man’s body cannot smell any better than this clean, neutral smell with few associations. The wind is blowing now. You pull me closer to your chest and still say nothing on the way home. The smell of camphor balls becomes stronger, a homey smell. Yet, I know fully: It is your home. _________________ This dark
Ceiling without a star |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu] ericcoliu作品集 二品总督 (刚入二品,小心做人)
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发表于: 星期五 五月 30, 2008 3:37 pm 发表主题: |
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When Man Enters Woman by Anne Sexton (1928 - 1974, by suicide)
When man
enters woman,
like the surf biting the shore,
again and again,
and the woman opens her mouth in pleasure
and her teeth gleam
like the alphabet,
Logos appears milking a star,
and the man
inside of woman
ties a knot
so that they will
never again be separate
and the woman
climbs into a flower
and swallows its stem
and Logos appears
and unleashed their rivers.
This man,
this woman
with their double hunger,
have tried to reach through
the curtain of God
and briefly they have,
though God
in His perversity
unties the knot. _________________ Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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