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.行者.

里太白在另线说"兄弟", 行者正好周末出去走了十来英里的山路, 偶得几句, 贻笑大方...

想作"诗人": 以长短句代书致白云下的兄弟-草于Weekend Hiking的路上

问一声兄弟还好吗
十七年了吧
那白云也是挥不去
记得你说那下面就是天涯

初春的那个中午
天也是这么蓝
迎面的风是那么冷
象当年的秋天

听听, 不就是一个点吗

跨过高山
人们封它喜马拉雅
流过碧水
人们赞它高峡

趟过戈壁
见过沉沙
或许是曾牵过万年的胡杨
一起路过君家

兄弟, 别老看着它出神
不管变花还是变马
不就是一朵白云
见过那堵墙吗
人说那是真的侯门

兄弟还好吧

NOTE: 以前有句"独立千年逢乱世, 横行万里对残阳", "苑小不邀关外客, 摇身一放入侯门"以及"阳春不比三秋暖, 犹透征衣冷到心".
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臭豆腐 · 发表于: 星期一四月 07, 2008 6:15 pm 发表主题:

歌词

李拜六 · 发表于: 星期一四月 07, 2008 6:18 pm 发表主题:

.行者., 被人牵记，是很温暖的感觉。
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.行者.

A bit different version of ...

To my brother far under white clouds

Hi, my broth-er, a-gain Good morn-ing
Time goes by, and year turns sev-en-teen
Then whites seemed to stare us all the day
You said must un-der-neath run no-way

Re-mem-ber-ing, the ear-ly spring noon
The sky a-bove both us was same blue
The cold wind a-gainst was a big stun
Freez-ing as so much as the fall's cool

Att-en-tion, Is-n't it a spot of

Once when it soared o-ver the moun-tain
Top of world, we stacked with mon-arch crown
Once when it o-ver-looked the o-cean
A piece of mir-ror, we proud-ly sang

Once when passed Go-bi oh my the west
Once when saw riv-er in a full sand
May-be once with the Eu-phra-ti-ca
To-geth-er stopped by at your home-land

Oh, my broth-er, don't be a gaz-er
Does it mat-ter (be a) stal-lion or (a) flow-er
Is-n't it a cloud of white oh my
Have-n't you seen the wall all for sure
All say a gate-way to the fu-ture

Oh Good morn-ing, my dear-est broth-er

Note: the Eu-phra-ti-ca, i.e., Populus euphratica.
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.行者. · 发表于: 星期一四月 07, 2008 7:42 pm 发表主题:

连南河 · 发表于: 星期一四月 07, 2008 7:44 pm 发表主题:

一个谦逊的行者
一道美丽的人生
枫园背后的故事
一座古韵的新城

李拜六 · 发表于: 星期一四月 07, 2008 8:04 pm 发表主题:

.行者.,浮生一梦须臾耳。北美春天草，南山日暮云。
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.行者. · 发表于: 星期二四月 08, 2008 10:42 am 发表主题:

里兄的是一个解释, 当然有多个 Smile

基本和上次"结巴"的"图穷尤使惧秦王"同时, 行者有首"犹记当年旧夕阳":

犹记当年旧夕阳, 玉泉湖畔柳丝长
时无重负承家业, 频有轻车逐夜凉
提笔再悬三径月, 衔杯难忘五人帮
堪嘘佳节登高处, 未老尤思聚一乡

还有一学步的One in Five(当时诗友八月风把它翻成了中文-从别人的眼里看, 也挺有意思-有空再去找一找).

One in Five

Once were we together,
Together we run
Run into the raging water we did,
Did over the wild iced pond

Once were we together,
Together played on our street
The street looked long and crowded
Crowded inches recalled from the young feet

Once were we together,
Together passed thru the neighbors' wall
The wall was so dirty and high
High how much, then not measured by the tinny tall

Once were we together,
Together we sat on the colorful sunset
Sunset was our beauty
Beauty we would never forget

Once were we together,
Together now we have dream
Dream full of the colors
Colors join a bright beam
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.行者. · 发表于: 星期二四月 08, 2008 10:44 am 发表主题:

.行者. · 发表于: 星期二四月 08, 2008 12:32 pm 发表主题:

.行者.

抛块砖, 引大家玉...

Anchored the Night, Originated By Zhang Ji of Tang Dynasty

Translated also in 7 syllables on 4/8/08

The frost soaked in-to to-night
while moon-set with the cried crow
Fish-ing lamps run to the sight
Ma-ple banks slept with sor-row

Sit-ting Gu-su the out-side
O my Tem-ple of Cold Hill
Com-ing boat wel-comed by tide
of a mid-night a-woke bell

附张继之枫桥夜泊

月落乌啼霜满天, 江枫渔火对愁眠
姑苏城外寒山寺, 夜半钟声到客船
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.行者.

"唐三百"七绝(含乐府)倾向性调查之一

之所以想到"枫桥夜泊", 是去年行者在闲地主持的一项"唐三百七绝(含乐府)"调查(只有九位诗友实际投票, 每人最多投十首, 可以投不足十首), 张继的枫桥夜泊以八票(8 of 9)选为第一, 超过了

李白的"下江陵"(6 of 9)
王维的"渭城曲"(6 of 9)
贺知章的"回乡偶书"(5 of 9)
王之涣的"出塞"(5 of 9)
韦应物的"滁州西涧"(5 of 9)
李白的"送孟浩然之广陵"(5 of 9)

而排在"唐三百"里"最受大家喜爱"的七绝之首.

这只反映了彼时彼地彼人的意见, 不知这里的诗友是如何看的? 对大家的看法, 行者很感兴趣.

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261(5) // 贺知章：回乡偶书
262(2) // 张旭：桃花溪
263(3) // 王维：九月九日忆山东兄弟
264(3) // 王昌龄：芙蓉楼送辛渐
267(4) // 王翰：凉州词
268(5) // 李白：送孟浩然之广陵
269(6) // 李白：下江陵
271(1)
272(5) // 韦应物：滁州西涧
273(8 ) // 张继：枫桥夜泊
274(1)
275(2) // 刘方平：月夜
280(4) // 刘禹锡：乌衣巷
286(1)
288(1)
290(1)
291(2) // 杜牧：泊秦淮
292(3) // 杜牧：寄扬州韩绰判官
294(3) // 杜牧：秋夕
296(1)
298(4) // 李商隐：夜雨寄北
303(1)
308(2) // 韦庄：金陵图
312(6) // 王维：渭城曲
315(2) // 王昌龄：出塞
316(5) // 王之涣：出塞
320(2) // 杜秋娘：金缕衣

将复制此贴, 单开一线.
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臭豆腐 · 发表于: 星期三四月 09, 2008 5:59 am 发表主题:

.行者. · 发表于: 星期三四月 09, 2008 1:28 pm 发表主题: