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七绝 “宽”韵的故事The Story about the Rhymes of Chinese Poems

一壶暖在玉冰清，
行者无疆更透明。
镇里南河风雨奏，
枫园总是放歌晴。

5:00 to 5:20am, March 7, 2008 Toronto

The Story about the Rhymes of Chinese Poems

Oh! My gosh, very interesting
Chinese poetics advancing
Thank you so much. For me
That haven't been understanding
All the same rhyme as -ong -eng -ing ?
How about -ang? just for one
Should be including
That for everyone easy going
Thank you so much
Mr Liusheng & Bingqing
We are discussing
4:00 to 4:30am, Feb 17, 2008 Toronto

南河寄语 走近连南河
HORMISH GARDEN NIGHT TALKING:To near Liannan River more

“宽”韵的故事
给人许多启示

拿出你的诗
讨论欣赏娱乐交流
还有一个目的
修改

每个人都是诗人
每个人都是老师

南河枫园连南河
也希望各位诗友
多提一些批评建议

在此也特别感谢
对南河绝句连南河
提出过修改意见的
行者无疆小六子
登志Edgar hahaview

记住你们
一生一世
5:00 to 5:30am, March 9, 2008 Toronto

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七绝 “宽”韵的故事The Story about the Rhymes of Chinese Poems

一壶暖在玉冰清，
行者无疆更透明。
镇里南河风雨奏，
枫园总是放歌晴。

5:00 to 5:20am, March 7, 2008 Toronto

The Story about the Rhymes of Chinese Poems

Oh! My gosh, very interesting
Chinese poetics advancing
Thank you so much. For me
That haven't been understanding
All the same rhyme as -ong -eng -ing ?
How about -ang? just for one
Should be including
That for everyone easy going
Thank you so much
Mr Liusheng & Bingqing
We are discussing
4:00 to 4:30am, Feb 17, 2008 Toronto

南河寄语 走近连南河
HORMISH GARDEN NIGHT TALKING:To near Liannan River more

“宽”韵的故事
给人许多启示

拿出你的诗
讨论欣赏娱乐交流
还有一个目的
修改

每个人都是诗人
每个人都是老师

南河枫园连南河
也希望各位诗友
多提一些批评建议

在此也特别感谢
对南河绝句连南河
提出过修改意见的
行者无疆小六子
登志Edgar hahaview

记住你们
一生一世
5:00 to 5:30am, March 9, 2008 Toronto

[登志]

学习老兄这种虚心的风格。问好。
_________________
弹铗身空老，抚琴心不羁。

[[北窗]]

学习老兄这种虚心的风格。问好。
_________________
弹铗身空老，抚琴心不羁。