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星子 · 发表于: 星期五十二月 07, 2007 9:24 am 发表主题: My snowman

Snow is falling,
yet I feel warm,
before we taste salty,
I will live in my dream.

Snow piles there,
And my snowman will never fall,
I save him for the whole season,
till the bell rings me awake.

O, my snowman, pure and white,
O, my snowman, placid and bright,
You live in my dream
and dance in my mind,
But I fear
waking with tears brimmed
from your eyes.
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Champagne · 发表于: 星期五十二月 07, 2007 5:18 pm 发表主题: Re: My snowman

ericcoliu · 发表于: 星期六十二月 08, 2007 11:15 am 发表主题: Re: My snowman

星子 · 发表于: 星期六十二月 08, 2007 11:31 am 发表主题:

Hi Champagne,

Sometimes we do. right?

Anna
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星子 · 发表于: 星期六十二月 08, 2007 11:31 am 发表主题:

Hi Eric,

Yes, you are right.

I revised it.
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