酷我-北美枫

林溪

*How much I want to be your river

It is identical with so many nights
I was submerged in the lonely/solitmy night
by crystal-clear

*多想成为你的河流

和许多个夜晚相同
我被清亮的月光
淹没在孤独的夜里

I don't know what time it is
My lvely little fish
Has swimming into the moon
The foams he throw up
Have been hung up in the whole bay-tree

不知道什么时候
我的小鱼儿
已经游进了月亮
她吐出的泡泡
挂满了整棵桂树

How much Iwant to be your river
And rumwng slowly under the foot of bay-tree
The preserved petals of sweet os manthus blown down by the wind
Have been shed on the surfale of my water

多想成为你的河流
在桂树下缓缓地流淌
那些被风吹下的桂花
洒满我的水面

*Roses

The twenty-one rose following water
Floated through the forest in which the birds are singing
Now,you are standing before/in front of me
They seem as if the shooting star shower
The shy red face rose
Why are you fond of the digital of "21"
And in the deep night of saint valentine's Day
Captured my secrest having been in my heart for many years

*玫瑰

顺水而来的二十一枝玫瑰
漂过禽鸟和鸣的树林
现在，你们站在我的面前
婉若多年前的那阵流星
牵着少年的手，在天街流浪
在我面前羞红粉脸的玫瑰
你们为何用二十一这个数字
并在情人节的夜里，将我
深埋心底多年的秘密俘虏

what twenty-one roses
You even can intoxicate my with your fragrance
Please slow down you footsteps
I will tell the merciless runing water
Or enable him take my with him

我闻香而醉的二十一枝玫瑰啊
请放慢你们的脚步－－请把
我的心意告诉不解人意的流水
或者让它们连同我一起带走

I will follow your direction
And hunt tor the place in which the love orininate
I will sow my love verse
In the warm place
Then I will wind up my familiar songs with you

我要顺着你们来的方向
云寻找爱最初萌芽的地方
我要把我的情诗
也播种在那个温暖的地方
然后，我陪着你们
－－顺水而来的二十一枝玫瑰
唱完我所会唱的情歌

林溪 · 发表于: 星期六十一月 20, 2004 11:01 pm 发表主题:

帮忙看看这两首诗译的有没有问题！
林溪这里谢过了！

星子 · 发表于: 星期日十一月 21, 2004 11:09 pm 发表主题:

正在琢磨1
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和平岛 · 发表于: 星期一十一月 22, 2004 12:01 am 发表主题:

有劳星子辛苦了

林溪 · 发表于: 星期三十一月 24, 2004 3:01 am 发表主题:

催一催各位诗兄诗姐。

林溪 · 发表于: 星期四十一月 25, 2004 4:30 am 发表主题:

怎么还不见动静呀。
美女呀，是不是忘了。

星子 · 发表于: 星期四十一月 25, 2004 9:20 am 发表主题:

*How much I want to be your river

As the same as other many lonely nights
I am submerged in the crystal-clear moonlight

*多想成为你的河流

和许多个夜晚相同
我被清亮的月光
淹没在孤独的夜里

I don't know what time it is
when my little fish
swim into the moon
The foams he throw up
Have been hung up in the whole laurel tree

不知道什么时候
我的小鱼儿
已经游进了月亮
她吐出的泡泡
挂满了整棵桂树

How much I want to be your river
And trickle under the root of the laurel tree
The sweet-scented osmanthus blown down by the wind
Have been shed on the surface of this river.

---------Too busy------- OH,hhhhhhhhhhhhh

林溪 · 发表于: 星期四十一月 25, 2004 8:00 pm 发表主题:

谢谢星子姐为林溪操刀！林溪这里给你奉茶了—— Laughing

《玫瑰》
哪位诗兄诗姐帮我翻呀！

林溪 · 发表于: 星期四十一月 25, 2004 8:31 pm 发表主题:

少了最后一节呀！

秋叶

林溪

谢谢了！

星子 · 发表于: 星期一十二月 06, 2004 12:00 pm 发表主题:

Tonight, I will do it.... Wink

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星子 · 发表于: 星期一十二月 06, 2004 10:53 pm 发表主题:

*Roses

The twenty-one roses
float on the stream
through forests with birds singing
Now,stand in front of me,
as if the shooting star shower long time ago.
How did the "21" roses fond by you,
on the mid-night of saint valentine's Day
Captured my secrest that had been in my heart for many years?

*玫瑰

顺水而来的二十一枝玫瑰
漂过禽鸟和鸣的树林
现在，你们站在我的面前
婉若多年前的那阵流星
牵着少年的手，在天街流浪
在我面前羞红粉脸的玫瑰
你们为何用二十一这个数字
并在情人节的夜里，将我
深埋心底多年的秘密俘虏

what twenty-one roses!
You even can intoxicate me ith your fragrance
Please slow down you footsteps
I will tell the merciless runing water
Or let them take me away.

我闻香而醉的二十一枝玫瑰啊
请放慢你们的脚步－－请把
我的心意告诉不解人意的流水
或者让它们连同我一起带走

I will follow your direction
And hunt for the place love begin
I will sow my love verse
In the warm place
Then I will wind up my familiar songs with you

我要顺着你们来的方向
云寻找爱最初萌芽的地方
我要把我的情诗
也播种在那个温暖的地方
然后，我陪着你们
－－顺水而来的二十一枝玫瑰
唱完我所会唱的情歌

林溪 · 发表于: 星期三十二月 08, 2004 4:20 am 发表主题:

谢谢！
还有上一首的最后一节呢？

星子 · 发表于: 星期五十二月 10, 2004 12:55 pm 发表主题: