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风之子[momgirl] 风之子作品集 八品县丞 (又一个不小心,升了!)
注册时间: 2004-06-15 帖子: 59 来自: guangzhou china
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发表于: 星期日 十二月 05, 2004 6:07 am 发表主题: 尝试的英文诗两首 |
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Dream for lover
2004.11.29
I have a lover beside the black sea
He looks like strong and tender feeling
I love him, I love him
When I meet him the day
Night yesterday
He touched me in the dream
I murmur my darling
Kiss me hold me hot for happy
He hug me hot and yell please
I waked early morning
He called me from beside the black sea
I cry out my darling
Why you are so faraway
But nothing stop my miss
My sweetheart my darling
Remember me love me beyond everything
Oh, thank god
let me know you are beside the black sea
I love you than deep the black sea
I wait for you until dry the black sea
My darling my darling
Do you love me as I love you say
See you in winter sunshine
2004.12.04
afternoon and night
cold wind blows in front of my eye
all house are in silence quite
I am alone in my room
Many bad things come my mind
They ask me: how about you now
I return my face
See you in winter sunshine
And say me: I love you
Oh, I have you feel so warm
Then I tell them
Now I am fine
Oh, my darling my dream
Perhaps you never understand
Why I need you do not say good bye
A suffering soul from the east
She alone passed through many years
Now meet you in secret
Every afternoon and night
See you in the winter sunshine
I feel so happy and warm _________________ 我是风,无处停留。 |
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晓鸣[自己的敌人] 晓鸣作品集 Site Admin
注册时间: 2004-05-05 帖子: 9474 来自: 加拿大多伦多
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发表于: 星期日 十二月 05, 2004 7:20 am 发表主题: |
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不错! |
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风之子[momgirl] 风之子作品集 八品县丞 (又一个不小心,升了!)
注册时间: 2004-06-15 帖子: 59 来自: guangzhou china
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发表于: 星期日 十二月 05, 2004 10:04 am 发表主题: |
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really? _________________ 我是风,无处停留。 |
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高岸[我还没有昵称] 高岸作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
注册时间: 2004-06-29 帖子: 4398 来自: 多伦多
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发表于: 星期一 十二月 06, 2004 7:56 pm 发表主题: |
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难得。 |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期一 十二月 06, 2004 10:30 pm 发表主题: |
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Nice try.
Lately I try to write a poem:
I had you at hello....
But since it never happened, so it is difficult for me to hunt for the feeling... _________________
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风之子[momgirl] 风之子作品集 八品县丞 (又一个不小心,升了!)
注册时间: 2004-06-15 帖子: 59 来自: guangzhou china
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发表于: 星期二 十二月 07, 2004 7:21 am 发表主题: |
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其实第一首有点为写英文诗夸张了素材本身,第二首纯粹是我个人的惆怅,并不真指对方,就像一种遥远的回忆,温暖安详。
现在我的状态和星子一样,关于感情。 _________________ 我是风,无处停留。 |
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