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语风万里 · 发表于: 星期日八月 15, 2004 10:39 am 发表主题: 试译：蒹葭

蒹葭

蒹葭苍苍，白露为霜。

所谓佳人，在水一方。

溯洄从之，道阻且长。

溯游从之，宛在水中央。

the reed

reed do be darkgreen,the white dew turn into frost.

the beauty what you call,is opposite by river side.

pursue against the river,the road is rugged and long.

Go searching downstream time and again,her as if in central water.
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漫是星光，曲水流觞，一肚花雕眼迷茫。

风过回廊，似歌吟唱，半院黄花满院香。

白采水 · 发表于: 星期一八月 16, 2004 9:27 am 发表主题:

呵呵看着受用
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星子 · 发表于: 星期一八月 16, 2004 9:46 pm 发表主题:

How about?

the reed

darkgreen darkgreen reed with white dew as frost,

the beauty you long for is by the opposite bank.

want to pursue her against the current, the road is rugged and long.

Go searching her downstream, her, as in central water. ?????

语风万里 · 发表于: 星期一八月 16, 2004 11:43 pm 发表主题:

no bad! thanks!
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漫是星光，曲水流觞，一肚花雕眼迷茫。

风过回廊，似歌吟唱，半院黄花满院香。

风动 · 发表于: 星期六十月 30, 2004 11:36 pm 发表主题: Re: 试译：蒹葭

[quote="语风万里"]蒹葭

蒹葭苍苍，白露为霜。
所谓佳人，在水一方。

Green reed green reed, white due frosting
The beauty the beauty, is by the river side
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