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星子 · 发表于: 星期六八月 07, 2004 9:01 pm 发表主题: Home

I brought Jason to visit
a friend with a newborn baby.
Jason was hidden behind me,
to see the tiny toes and faint face.
I held his hands and pointed at my tummy,
a home for you when you were tiny;

On the way back,
we saw a homeless kid,
huddled in a corner with eyelids shut;
Jason wondered where his home would be,
I murmured his home might be lost.
With hands tightly held, Jason relieved at home.
As night came, he lift my gown,
for a home he wanted to enter.

Home is not a house, but the one with love,
For ever and ever, I wish to be his love home.

晓鸣 · 发表于: 星期日八月 08, 2004 4:45 am 发表主题:

诚挚的母爱,真诚动人. 前两段似可压缩得更精炼一些.

yufeng · 发表于: 星期五九月 29, 2006 11:55 pm 发表主题:

On the way back,
we saw a homeless kid,
huddled in a corner with eyelids shut;
Jason wondered where his home would be,
I murmured his home might be lost.

拜读，问好！
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肖今 · 发表于: 星期六九月 30, 2006 3:48 am 发表主题:

Home is not a house, but the one with love,
For ever and ever, I wish to be his love home.
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NO FOREVER , ONLY LONGER！

赵福治 · 发表于: 星期六九月 30, 2006 5:26 am 发表主题:

无法欣赏,不懂英文啊.
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千山鸿 · 发表于: 星期六九月 30, 2006 8:15 am 发表主题:

问好星子~~可惜英语不精欣赏不了啊!

高梁 · 发表于: 星期六九月 30, 2006 11:39 am 发表主题:

哇，快闪。看样子是英语。
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风动 · 发表于: 星期六九月 30, 2006 11:03 pm 发表主题:

Home is not a house, house is a not a home... Smile

梅影三叠 · 发表于: 星期日十月 01, 2006 8:15 am 发表主题:

如果译一下，欣赏的人会更多：）
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黄崇超 · 发表于: 星期日十月 01, 2006 9:33 pm 发表主题:

oh，i see i can not as you！
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frankjiang · 发表于: 星期一十月 02, 2006 6:52 pm 发表主题:

Home is not a house, but the one with love
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星子 · 发表于: 星期一十月 02, 2006 7:04 pm 发表主题:

谢谢大家,,,这是我很早写的了....
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