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秋叶 · 发表于: 星期六九月 04, 2004 2:38 am 发表主题: 美丽的梦者

贴上多年以前发在<<岭南音乐>>上我译配的一首歌词，抛砖引玉，不当之处，请各位不吝赐教，因时间太久，这里贴出的原作可能与原文有误，敬请如找到原文的贴出，万谢！

美丽的梦者

－－福斯特词曲

一

美丽的梦者，
快点醒来，
星光和露珠在把你等待。
月色驱走白昼的喧嚣，
洒下了一片银光皑皑。
美丽的梦者，
我歌中的皇后，
听我轻柔的歌声向你求爱,
生活的烦忧已经离开。
美丽的梦者你快点醒来，
美丽的梦者你快点醒来。

二

美丽的梦者，
遥远的海外，
美人鱼在唱述野生水怪。
小溪上雾霭轻轻荡漾，
等待着黎明的到来。
美丽的梦者，
我心中的光芒，
象晨曦映照着溪流大海,
忧郁的愁云就要散开。
美丽的梦者你快点醒来，
美丽的梦者你快点醒来。

秋叶译配

原文

BEAUTIFUL DREAMER

1
Beautiful dreamer
Wake unto me.
Starlight and dewdrops are waiting for thee.
Sounds of the rude world heard in the day.
Lull’d by the moonlight have all passed away.
Beautiful dreamer,
queen of my song.
List while g woo thee soft melody.
Gone are the cares of life’s busy throng.
Beautiful dreamer awak unto me.
Beautiful dreamer awak unto me.

2

Beautiful dreamer
Out on the sea
Mermaids are chanting the wild Lorelei.
Over the streamlet unpor are born.
Waiting to fade at the bright coming morn.
Beautiful dreamer,
beam of my heart.
E’en as the morn on the streamlet and sea.
Then will all clouds of sorrow depart.
Beautiful dreamer awak unto me.
Beautiful dreamer awak unto me.

jimmy · 发表于: 星期六九月 04, 2004 7:54 am 发表主题:

Stephen C. Foster (1826-1864)

Beautiful Dreamer Serenade

1Beautiful dreamer, wake unto me,
2Starlight and dewdrops are waiting for thee;
3Sounds of the rude world heard in the day,
4Lull'd by the moonlight have all pass'd a way!

5Beautiful dreamer, queen of my song,
6List while I woo thee with soft melody;
7Gone are the cares of life's busy throng, --
8Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!
9Beautiful dreamer awake unto me!

10Beautiful dreamer, out on the sea
11Mermaids are chaunting the wild lorelie;
12Over the streamlet vapors are borne,
13Waiting to fade at the bright coming morn.

14Beautiful dreamer, beam on my heart,
15E'en as the morn on the streamlet and sea;
16Then will all clouds of sorrow depart, --
17Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!
18Beautiful dreamer, awake unto me!

秋叶 · 发表于: 星期六九月 04, 2004 3:15 pm 发表主题:

Jimmy, 我手头现在没有原作，只有当时发表的版本，我发现几处有误，可能是印刷的错误，原作我找了好久未得，今终如愿，太谢谢了！

星子 · 发表于: 星期二九月 07, 2004 8:51 am 发表主题:

仔细拜读了。。很不错。。。