酷我-北美枫

温哥华失眠夜

Love may be beautiful, love may be bliss
But I only slept with you 'cause I was pissed

Roses are red, violets are blue,
sugar is sweet and so are you.
But the roses are wilting, the violets are dead,
the sugar bowl's empty and so is your head.

Of loving beauty you float with grace
If only you could hide your face

I thought that I could love no other
Until, that is, I met your brother

Kind, intelligent, loving and hot
These describe everything you're not

I want to feel your sweet embrace
But don't take that paper bag off of your face

I love your smile, your face, and your eyes-
Damn, I'm good at telling lies!

Every time I see your face
I wish I were in outer space

I saw your face as you walked by
but then I saw a better guy

I see your face when I am dreaming
That's why I always wake up screaming

My love, you take my breath away
What have you stepped in to smell this way
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星子 · 发表于: 星期日二月 26, 2006 12:18 pm 发表主题:

Every time I see your face
I wish I were in outer space

?????
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非马 · 发表于: 星期日二月 26, 2006 7:00 pm 发表主题:

"love may be bliss " bliss是个名词，似乎该在它前面加个"a"

"What have you stepped in to smell this way"里的"in"是否用"on" 较好？

星子 · 发表于: 星期日二月 26, 2006 9:59 pm 发表主题:

in this poem, love is really a twist...
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温哥华失眠夜 · 发表于: 星期一二月 27, 2006 6:55 pm 发表主题:

对不起，诸位。忘了注明这个是ZT的。
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I think I am, therefore I am, I think.