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司马策风

刹那 the very moment

[当代]司马策风英译：失眠夜

在相遇的那一刹那That very moment when our eyes touched
强光把一切都隐化Their beams have everything erased

只有四颗星星撞击着Four twinkiling stars have crashed
飞溅出朵朵纯情的火花Out of which the flowering love flashed

融化了我融化了你Melting you, melting me together
浇铸成一个永恒的惊讶Remoulding a wonder, forever,forever

啊强光把一切都隐化Oh Their beams have everything erased
在相遇的那一刹那 That moment when our eyes touched

1988夏原创于重庆 2005，12翻译温哥华
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星子 · 发表于: 星期三二月 01, 2006 1:35 pm 发表主题:

司马，拿出你做宰相的气派，，，别融化了
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星子 · 发表于: 星期四二月 02, 2006 10:26 pm 发表主题:

when our eyes touched .... It seems a little weird...

in fact, not eyes touched?
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