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[雪泥]

Reflect on Love


Would you bury Love in the earth?
Let it avoid frozen winter
Wind makes no sign as it blows
Speech leaves no traces as it’s made
So don’t pour out your heart to me

When the snow melts in early spring
Earth's delicate fragrance floats
Would you treasure this kind of love——
It leads us to endless aftertastes

Reflect on Love
{2}

You carried off Sun and Beach
after ‘Good-bye’
When love is gone ，even the air is becoming thinner
Standing on the other side of World ，
you tell me Ice is burning your lips

That’s enough，please go！
If I have a dream at night
it will be a sigh so meaningless
which sound can’t ring in your knocked sky
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[[雪泥]]

Reflect on Love


Would you bury Love in the earth?
Let it avoid frozen winter
Wind makes no sign as it blows
Speech leaves no traces as it’s made
So don’t pour out your heart to me

When the snow melts in early spring
Earth's delicate fragrance floats
Would you treasure this kind of love——
It leads us to endless aftertastes

Reflect on Love
{2}

You carried off Sun and Beach
after ‘Good-bye’
When love is gone ，even the air is becoming thinner
Standing on the other side of World ，
you tell me Ice is burning your lips

That’s enough，please go！
If I have a dream at night
it will be a sigh so meaningless
which sound can’t ring in your knocked sky
_________________
雪泥长篇《趟过祖母河》全本
雪泥小说选 新浪连载

[星子]

Would you bury Love in the earth?


首句比较生硬而不引人?

整体 seems not natural...

一家之言。。。。

感觉很象是翻译? Am I right?
_________________

[[ANNA]]

Would you bury Love in the earth?


首句比较生硬而不引人?

整体 seems not natural...

一家之言。。。。

感觉很象是翻译? Am I right?
_________________

[雪泥]

[[雪泥]]