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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期二 十二月 27, 2005 10:46 pm 发表主题: What have I bought? |
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I used to feel lucky
on each boxing day;
when I got good deals
I would be so content.
Such satisfaction was ended
as One winter I found
good things were never for sale
and what I desired were never on the market.
Though each boxing week
I am still on the line-up,
I pretend not knowing
the truth.
最后进行编辑的是 星子 on 星期二 十二月 27, 2005 11:24 pm, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期二 十二月 27, 2005 10:53 pm 发表主题: |
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Each boxing day we always got half-price good deals.
This year the same, but very practical things _________________
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和平岛[我还没有昵称] 和平岛作品集 一品翰林院大学士 (酷我!I made it!)
注册时间: 2004-05-16 帖子: 5614 来自: Victoria
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发表于: 星期二 十二月 27, 2005 11:42 pm 发表主题: Re: What have I bought? |
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nice, just some wordings:
I used to feel lucky
on boxing days;
when I got good deals
I would be very much satisfied
until one winter
I found out
good things were never for sale
and what I desired were never on the market.
Though every boxing week
I am still on the line-up,
pretending not knowing
the truth. |
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雪泥[雪泥] 雪泥作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2005-10-12 帖子: 421 来自: 西欧
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发表于: 星期三 十二月 28, 2005 6:56 am 发表主题: Re: What have I bought?改得真好 |
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和平岛 写到: | nice, just some wordings:
I used to feel lucky
on boxing days;
when I got good deals
I would be very much satisfied——————这里very和much在一起感觉别扭,再轻快点,删去一个字
until one winter
I found out
good things were never for sale
and what I desired were never on the market.
Though every boxing week
I am still on the line-up,
pretending not knowing
the truth. |
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叶雨[FAFAFA] 叶雨作品集 二品总督总管 (回首人生,前途在望)
注册时间: 2004-06-01 帖子: 3287
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发表于: 星期三 十二月 28, 2005 9:46 am 发表主题: |
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这个很有道理呢。我血拼回来一大堆垃圾还沾沾自喜。 |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期三 十二月 28, 2005 3:26 pm 发表主题: |
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Thanks all.
再改为。。
I used to feel lucky
each boxing day,
when I got good deals,
I would feel content.
Such simplicity ended
when one winter I found
good things were not for sale;
what I desired was not on the market.
Although every boxing week
continues to see me on the line-up,
I pretend to not knowing, but I do
know the truth. _________________
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和平岛[我还没有昵称] 和平岛作品集 一品翰林院大学士 (酷我!I made it!)
注册时间: 2004-05-16 帖子: 5614 来自: Victoria
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发表于: 星期三 十二月 28, 2005 7:52 pm 发表主题: |
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星子 写到: | Thanks all.
再改为。。
I used to feel lucky
each boxing day,
when I got good deals,
I would feel content.
Such simplicity ended
when one winter I found
good things were not for sale;
what I desired was not on the market.
Although every boxing week
continues to see me on the line-up,
I pretend to not knowing, but I do
know the truth. |
pretend not to know,
或者pretend not knowing,
这是语法问题
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期三 十二月 28, 2005 11:05 pm 发表主题: |
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Thanks Peace. You are right.
Should be pretend not knowing |
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