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帖子发表于: 星期二 十二月 27, 2005 10:46 pm    发表主题: What have I bought? 引用并回复

I used to feel lucky
on each boxing day;
when I got good deals
I would be so content.

Such satisfaction was ended
as One winter I found
good things were never for sale
and what I desired were never on the market.

Though each boxing week
I am still on the line-up,
I pretend not knowing
the truth.


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帖子发表于: 星期二 十二月 27, 2005 10:53 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Each boxing day we always got half-price good deals.

This year the same, but very practical things
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帖子发表于: 星期二 十二月 27, 2005 11:42 pm    发表主题: Re: What have I bought? 引用并回复

nice, just some wordings:


I used to feel lucky
on boxing days;
when I got good deals
I would be very much satisfied

until one winter
I found out
good things were never for sale
and what I desired were never on the market.

Though every boxing week
I am still on the line-up,
pretending not knowing
the truth.
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帖子发表于: 星期三 十二月 28, 2005 6:56 am    发表主题: Re: What have I bought?改得真好 引用并回复

和平岛 写到:
nice, just some wordings:


I used to feel lucky
on boxing days;
when I got good deals
I would be very much satisfied——————这里very和much在一起感觉别扭,再轻快点,删去一个字

until one winter
I found out
good things were never for sale
and what I desired were never on the market.

Though every boxing week
I am still on the line-up,
pretending not knowing
the truth.

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帖子发表于: 星期三 十二月 28, 2005 9:46 am    发表主题: 引用并回复

这个很有道理呢。我血拼回来一大堆垃圾还沾沾自喜。
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帖子发表于: 星期三 十二月 28, 2005 3:26 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Thanks all.

再改为。。

I used to feel lucky
each boxing day,
when I got good deals,
I would feel content.

Such simplicity ended
when one winter I found
good things were not for sale;
what I desired was not on the market.

Although every boxing week
continues to see me on the line-up,
I pretend to not knowing, but I do
know the truth.
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帖子发表于: 星期三 十二月 28, 2005 7:52 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

星子 写到:
Thanks all.

再改为。。

I used to feel lucky
each boxing day,
when I got good deals,
I would feel content.

Such simplicity ended
when one winter I found
good things were not for sale;
what I desired was not on the market.

Although every boxing week
continues to see me on the line-up,
I pretend to not knowing, but I do
know the truth.



pretend not to know,
或者pretend not knowing,
这是语法问题
Very Happy
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帖子发表于: 星期三 十二月 28, 2005 11:05 pm    发表主题: 引用并回复

Thanks Peace. You are right.

Should be pretend not knowing
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