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[老土]

看到星子能写那么多的英文诗，据说比中文还顺溜，赞叹之余，羡慕得不得了。

练习着试几句：


Lonely Traveler

I thought I left without a word
disappear forever with sad
but she already in my heart
her songs turn me around back

She is the colourful silk
morning grass has been covered
I am the lonely smoke
rising over the sand

She is a walking beauty
along the bank of river
I am red shadow of the sun
flashing in the water

She is a touchable melody
floating under the sky
I am the echo of sorrow
unnoticeable whisper and cry


顺便也练习一下翻译：


孤独的旅行者

我想带着悲哀永远消失，
默默地离去，
但是她已经在我心中，
她的歌声让我转身回忆。

她是五色缤纷的丝绸，
覆盖着清晨的草地，
我是一缕孤烟，
在荒漠升起。

她沿着河岸，
漫步轻柔美丽，
我是红色太阳的倒影，
闪烁在水底。

她是漂浮在空中，
触人心弦的旋律，
我是伤感的回声，
几乎听不到的低语和哭泣。


搞不清 the 该怎么用，土人说洋话，到底心里没谱，有太多的担心，担心语法错误，担心陈词滥调，担心空洞浅薄...，所以仅此一回，以后不会再写了。
.

[[大漠孤烟]]

看到星子能写那么多的英文诗，据说比中文还顺溜，赞叹之余，羡慕得不得了。

练习着试几句：


Lonely Traveler

I thought I left without a word
disappear forever with sad
but she already in my heart
her songs turn me around back

She is the colourful silk
morning grass has been covered
I am the lonely smoke
rising over the sand

She is a walking beauty
along the bank of river
I am red shadow of the sun
flashing in the water

She is a touchable melody
floating under the sky
I am the echo of sorrow
unnoticeable whisper and cry


顺便也练习一下翻译：


孤独的旅行者

我想带着悲哀永远消失，
默默地离去，
但是她已经在我心中，
她的歌声让我转身回忆。

她是五色缤纷的丝绸，
覆盖着清晨的草地，
我是一缕孤烟，
在荒漠升起。

她沿着河岸，
漫步轻柔美丽，
我是红色太阳的倒影，
闪烁在水底。

她是漂浮在空中，
触人心弦的旋律，
我是伤感的回声，
几乎听不到的低语和哭泣。


搞不清 the 该怎么用，土人说洋话，到底心里没谱，有太多的担心，担心语法错误，担心陈词滥调，担心空洞浅薄...，所以仅此一回，以后不会再写了。
.

[和平岛]

翻译比洋文好, 再接再厉呀

[[我还没有昵称]]

翻译比洋文好, 再接再厉呀

[白水]

不论什么主题,到你笔下都变的幽默诙谐. 日后写诗再出现'忧伤'两字真对不住你的'乐观主义'. 是不是有山野菜吃的人都这么乐呵?下次回国别忘了带些与网友分享
这不是眼泪,是口水

[[FAFAFA]]

不论什么主题,到你笔下都变的幽默诙谐. 日后写诗再出现'忧伤'两字真对不住你的'乐观主义'. 是不是有山野菜吃的人都这么乐呵?下次回国别忘了带些与网友分享
这不是眼泪,是口水

[星子]

很喜欢里面的比喻。 生动独特。
比起我第一首英文诗好多了。 希望再接再励。

我写英文诗，开始是为了记单词，和提高英文。 现贴上我的第一首，许多单词是查字典的。

Emperor’s new clothes
---

There was an emperor,
indulged in new nice clothes.
Though each clothes fit and looked beautiful,
He never thought so.

Then two swindlers came,
Brought him nothing but trick.
Wearing these lies,
The emperor appeared bare and stupid.
The whole city was crazy,
laughed at the emperor too late.
Only the little boy remained pure and wise,
Cause he was not a liar.

This story may be fake,
But the lesson was true.
Everyone is his own king,
Wearing falsity and mask,
Cause he is not confident and pureness.
Then the king is a mock,
And so is the hollow self.

[[ANNA]]

很喜欢里面的比喻。 生动独特。
比起我第一首英文诗好多了。 希望再接再励。

我写英文诗，开始是为了记单词，和提高英文。 现贴上我的第一首，许多单词是查字典的。

Emperor’s new clothes
---

There was an emperor,
indulged in new nice clothes.
Though each clothes fit and looked beautiful,
He never thought so.

Then two swindlers came,
Brought him nothing but trick.
Wearing these lies,
The emperor appeared bare and stupid.
The whole city was crazy,
laughed at the emperor too late.
Only the little boy remained pure and wise,
Cause he was not a liar.

This story may be fake,
But the lesson was true.
Everyone is his own king,
Wearing falsity and mask,
Cause he is not confident and pureness.
Then the king is a mock,
And so is the hollow self.

[万沐]

很好，老土加油！

[[夏天来了]]

很好，老土加油！