酷我-北美枫

[icecanadaice]

能否大家把自己愿意加进去的话或诗句也都写几句下来,精彩的部分选出,最后和岛版的后一篇融合一下,也许更能显现出五光十色的"枫"彩.
岛版"文武双全",令人信服.

[[皇甫丽雯]]

能否大家把自己愿意加进去的话或诗句也都写几句下来,精彩的部分选出,最后和岛版的后一篇融合一下,也许更能显现出五光十色的"枫"彩.
岛版"文武双全",令人信服.

[苗玉振]

太邋遢了 有点长戎的感觉 建议简短些

[[苗玉振]]

太邋遢了 有点长戎的感觉 建议简短些

[星子]

敬佩刘功业先生的直言和文化功底。

完全赞同和欣赏。

也很赞同ICE的提议，更反映出北美枫的特色，移民文化和东方文化传统美精神风貌。更能打动人心。。。

[[ANNA]]

敬佩刘功业先生的直言和文化功底。

完全赞同和欣赏。

也很赞同ICE的提议，更反映出北美枫的特色，移民文化和东方文化传统美精神风貌。更能打动人心。。。

[叶雨]

和平岛主的第二版好很多。
我也很赞成刘功业的评论。
更多地，我们希望一个普通读者能通过卷首来引起兴趣，和大致知道后面的页面他将看到什么。卷首语的功能应该象新片预告的片段一样，让一般读者瞄一下，噢！兴趣来了，好，翻看下一页......

[[FFFFFF]]

和平岛主的第二版好很多。
我也很赞成刘功业的评论。
更多地，我们希望一个普通读者能通过卷首来引起兴趣，和大致知道后面的页面他将看到什么。卷首语的功能应该象新片预告的片段一样，让一般读者瞄一下，噢！兴趣来了，好，翻看下一页......

[和平岛]

卷首语Opening Statement
和平岛/加拿大BC省维多利亚
From HePingDao, Editor-in-Chief

Hesitant to call ourselves literati, not only because we are far away from our cultural roots, but also because we departed from our motherland, the soil where we were born and grown up. One maple leaf has too many stories to tell. If we say, literature is being peripherized by the tide of commercialization, the Chinese immigrant literature must be an abandoned child. I grasp the term 'marginal man', to depict an immigrant and his cultural being.

不敢自称文化人，不仅因我们远离文化的经脉，远离祖国，那生我养我的土壤! 一片飘泊的枫叶，饱含多少凄风冷雨！如果说在商业化大潮中，纯粹文学被日渐边缘化，移民文学就是这现代城市的弃儿了。忽想起用“边缘人”描述移民及其文化。

Although we live in prosperous cities, our inner sides are struggling in a spiritual desert; Spinned by the torrent of Western culture, the blood in our veins runs a river of five thousand years’ Eastern civilization. Conflict, cultural conflict. Silent, Vancouver's silent nights, blocks of foreign-style houses are scattered like cigarette boxes. Something is burning inside. Bygone cloud and mist, lost foam. Sometimes cried like a baby, sometimes shouted like a wolf. Who am I? 26 letters. To whom this country belongs?

虽居闹市，内心却挣扎在精神生活的荒漠; 置身西方文化的中心，血脉里流淌的，却是五千年东方文明的长河。冲突，文化的冲突。沉默，沉默的温哥华之夜呀，鳞比节次的小洋房，香烟盒般排开。久郁胸中的块垒，燃烧着。过眼的云烟，迷失的泡沫。几度婴孩般低泣，几度野狼状长啸。我是谁？二十六个字母啊，这里又是谁的国度？

Push open a window, through a crystal ball, I heard the king is calling, facing the ocean: “Brothers all over the world…Let’s embrace each other in a wheat field.” That is such a holy land of literature, so pure that we are all longing for. Come back, the roaming marginal man! The weak, the lonely, the homeless, brothers from the east, the south, the north and the west, let's all match into the center of literature, to embrace the silence, with which we hold our land, an invaluable home, a noble faith: let us be united to build a leading bilingual literary journal in the world!

猛一把推开久闭的窗子，透过高悬的水晶球，听那面朝大海的王，召唤着：“全世界的兄弟们…要在麦地里拥抱”。麦地，那是怎样的文学圣地呀，自古文人志士追寻的净土。归去来兮，流浪的边缘人！脆弱的你，孤独的你，无家可归的你，“东方，南方，北方和西方”的兄弟，让我们回归文学的中心地带，拥抱沉默吧。在沉默中坚守着，一方属于自己的领地，一个家的珍贵，一份纯洁的信念：让我们共同创办一份世界一流的双语文学期刊！

This is not a mere dream. Not just for the hardship we've suffered, the tortuous path we follow, tears we burst into, the blood we sweat! We have mastered more than one language. Language! She leads us through this vale of tears and lust; she navigates us with a light in the open sea; she helps us find the right path into a brighter future. All things tend in one direction, and the universe holds all. The journal of North American Maple is founded on the idealistic bases of literary independence, freedom and justice. It will serve as an excellent platform for exchanges of opinions among authors, critics, and readers. It will be a strong bridge to connect the Eastern and the Western literature worlds.

这不仅仅是梦想。不仅仅因为我们，比别人多吃了一点点苦，多走了几条弯路，多洒了几滴热泪，多流了一把血汗，多学了几门外语！语言啊，语言！她让我们在物欲横流的尘世，找到一条回家的路；在世俗的汪洋大海里，看见一盏希望的明灯；在功利性时代，寻着一道通向世界的幽径！百川归海，有容乃大，《北美枫》，这个用独立、自由和公正的理念，建立起来的纯粹文学的避难所，必将是一个促进作者、评论家和读者交流的良好平台，是一座沟通东方和西方文学的坚实而有效的桥梁！

Thrust open the internet window, I see a golden field of wheat, the North American Maple. Marginal man, with you by my side, I will never feel lonely again. Let’s open wide our arms to ardently embrace a splendid spring of the Chinese literature!

推开网络这扇窗子，我看到了一片金色麦地，《北美枫》。边缘人，红尘有你，我不再寂寞！让我们张开双臂，热烈地拥抱，一个光辉灿烂的华语文学的春天吧！

[[我还没有昵称]]

卷首语Opening Statement
和平岛/加拿大BC省维多利亚
From HePingDao, Editor-in-Chief

Hesitant to call ourselves literati, not only because we are far away from our cultural roots, but also because we departed from our motherland, the soil where we were born and grown up. One maple leaf has too many stories to tell. If we say, literature is being peripherized by the tide of commercialization, the Chinese immigrant literature must be an abandoned child. I grasp the term 'marginal man', to depict an immigrant and his cultural being.

不敢自称文化人，不仅因我们远离文化的经脉，远离祖国，那生我养我的土壤! 一片飘泊的枫叶，饱含多少凄风冷雨！如果说在商业化大潮中，纯粹文学被日渐边缘化，移民文学就是这现代城市的弃儿了。忽想起用“边缘人”描述移民及其文化。

Although we live in prosperous cities, our inner sides are struggling in a spiritual desert; Spinned by the torrent of Western culture, the blood in our veins runs a river of five thousand years’ Eastern civilization. Conflict, cultural conflict. Silent, Vancouver's silent nights, blocks of foreign-style houses are scattered like cigarette boxes. Something is burning inside. Bygone cloud and mist, lost foam. Sometimes cried like a baby, sometimes shouted like a wolf. Who am I? 26 letters. To whom this country belongs?

虽居闹市，内心却挣扎在精神生活的荒漠; 置身西方文化的中心，血脉里流淌的，却是五千年东方文明的长河。冲突，文化的冲突。沉默，沉默的温哥华之夜呀，鳞比节次的小洋房，香烟盒般排开。久郁胸中的块垒，燃烧着。过眼的云烟，迷失的泡沫。几度婴孩般低泣，几度野狼状长啸。我是谁？二十六个字母啊，这里又是谁的国度？

Push open a window, through a crystal ball, I heard the king is calling, facing the ocean: “Brothers all over the world…Let’s embrace each other in a wheat field.” That is such a holy land of literature, so pure that we are all longing for. Come back, the roaming marginal man! The weak, the lonely, the homeless, brothers from the east, the south, the north and the west, let's all match into the center of literature, to embrace the silence, with which we hold our land, an invaluable home, a noble faith: let us be united to build a leading bilingual literary journal in the world!

猛一把推开久闭的窗子，透过高悬的水晶球，听那面朝大海的王，召唤着：“全世界的兄弟们…要在麦地里拥抱”。麦地，那是怎样的文学圣地呀，自古文人志士追寻的净土。归去来兮，流浪的边缘人！脆弱的你，孤独的你，无家可归的你，“东方，南方，北方和西方”的兄弟，让我们回归文学的中心地带，拥抱沉默吧。在沉默中坚守着，一方属于自己的领地，一个家的珍贵，一份纯洁的信念：让我们共同创办一份世界一流的双语文学期刊！

This is not a mere dream. Not just for the hardship we've suffered, the tortuous path we follow, tears we burst into, the blood we sweat! We have mastered more than one language. Language! She leads us through this vale of tears and lust; she navigates us with a light in the open sea; she helps us find the right path into a brighter future. All things tend in one direction, and the universe holds all. The journal of North American Maple is founded on the idealistic bases of literary independence, freedom and justice. It will serve as an excellent platform for exchanges of opinions among authors, critics, and readers. It will be a strong bridge to connect the Eastern and the Western literature worlds.

这不仅仅是梦想。不仅仅因为我们，比别人多吃了一点点苦，多走了几条弯路，多洒了几滴热泪，多流了一把血汗，多学了几门外语！语言啊，语言！她让我们在物欲横流的尘世，找到一条回家的路；在世俗的汪洋大海里，看见一盏希望的明灯；在功利性时代，寻着一道通向世界的幽径！百川归海，有容乃大，《北美枫》，这个用独立、自由和公正的理念，建立起来的纯粹文学的避难所，必将是一个促进作者、评论家和读者交流的良好平台，是一座沟通东方和西方文学的坚实而有效的桥梁！

Thrust open the internet window, I see a golden field of wheat, the North American Maple. Marginal man, with you by my side, I will never feel lonely again. Let’s open wide our arms to ardently embrace a splendid spring of the Chinese literature!

推开网络这扇窗子，我看到了一片金色麦地，《北美枫》。边缘人，红尘有你，我不再寂寞！让我们张开双臂，热烈地拥抱，一个光辉灿烂的华语文学的春天吧！

[和平岛]

非常感谢朋友们的建议
三易其稿而成，应该说，这是集体智慧的结晶！

英文部分，在出刊前，将请诗人STEVEN NOYUS 和北美枫顾问LORNA CROZIER审阅！

[[我还没有昵称]]

非常感谢朋友们的建议
三易其稿而成，应该说，这是集体智慧的结晶！

英文部分，在出刊前，将请诗人STEVEN NOYUS 和北美枫顾问LORNA CROZIER审阅！

[肖今]

好辛苦啊！精了许多！
_________________
░░破茧成蝶 眼泪，从此不咸░░

NO FOREVER , ONLY LONGER！

[[King]]

好辛苦啊！精了许多！
_________________
░░破茧成蝶 眼泪，从此不咸░░

NO FOREVER , ONLY LONGER！

[星子]

第三稿中英文都不错。。。。
欣赏。
_________________

[[ANNA]]

第三稿中英文都不错。。。。
欣赏。
_________________

[白水]

一份耕耘, 一份收获. 岛斑, 辛苦了
先置顶几天吧, 说不准还有人和璞雕玉

[[FAFAFA]]

一份耕耘, 一份收获. 岛斑, 辛苦了
先置顶几天吧, 说不准还有人和璞雕玉

[晓鸣]

简洁明确, 不错.
辛苦了!

[[自己的敌人]]

简洁明确, 不错.
辛苦了!

[叶雨]

内容上更简洁了。排版的时候需要注意，不能这么一段中文一段英文间隔的。要分开。

一定要站在读者立场来看问题才会真正发现问题。

[[FAFAFA]]

内容上更简洁了。排版的时候需要注意，不能这么一段中文一段英文间隔的。要分开。

一定要站在读者立场来看问题才会真正发现问题。

[肖今]

可惜传不上来呢
_________________
░░破茧成蝶 眼泪，从此不咸░░

NO FOREVER , ONLY LONGER！

[[King]]

可惜传不上来呢
_________________
░░破茧成蝶 眼泪，从此不咸░░

NO FOREVER , ONLY LONGER！

[水稻]

我体会到文中的真诚。好！
辛苦了！

[[水稻]]

我体会到文中的真诚。好！
辛苦了！

[碧青]

读后热血沸腾.问好!
_________________
像风那样自由翻看四季风光多好

[[碧青]]

读后热血沸腾.问好!
_________________
像风那样自由翻看四季风光多好

[boxuehua]

写得不错啊

[[我还没有昵称]]

写得不错啊