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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
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 发表于: 星期五 九月 12, 2008 8:10 pm 发表主题: Re: A slip of the moon |
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Hi! Eric:
I think everyone here is overwhelmed by you, Professor Literature:
Professor Eric Liu, PhD. in Literature,
Author of notes on this, comments on that,
And criticisms on every possible thing,
Except on life.
Please just shut your mouth and write your poems. I'll be your attentive and demanding reader.
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My year-long writing project is called Reading, Writing, and Life on the Page. Did you forget this?
Thanks for your advice and suggestions. I've revised my piece.
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
ericcoliu作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2007-05-29
帖子: 1393
来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期日 九月 14, 2008 7:33 pm 发表主题: |
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What follows are replies from my fellow poets from Wild Poetry Forum:
Chen,
I just wanted to add my 2 cents to the voices already in this thread. I am reading this very late at night, and it's really just a beautiful, serene image to think about as the rain pounds down outside my apartment! The repetition of the word moon works for me. Thanks for sharing!
Best,
Carin
The moon that reflex in your eye’s reflex in her eye’s. Just moon beams apart.
Excellent Rod
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