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ericcoliu · 发表于: 星期三十月 08, 2008 7:45 am 发表主题:

The following replies are from poets at Wild Poetry Forum:

Chen-ou, this is a marvel of a timepiece.
It seems to contain all and everything; yet it's light and bouncy as the mere reflection of a shadow.
Yes, just like time.

-- Jane Røken

I think time is a braking down into small pieces
for humans to study,and learn and grow in. I think when we die, we hatch into a more mature life, without the shell limited view of life- we become what we have made of ourselves within our pereception of time. The larger life that surrounds this time encompasses all time, there is no time, all time. Some do this some do that, we learn from all angles, forever... if we have anything in us that lasts.My view at least.
I enjoyed your poem very much.

-- Cosima
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul

christine · 发表于: 星期四十月 09, 2008 9:17 am 发表主题:

Champagne · 发表于: 星期六十月 11, 2008 3:33 pm 发表主题:

Yes, seize the day.

Life is short and time is fleeting -- "eat, drink and be merry, for tomorrow we die."
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.