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温暖的水獸[温暖的水獸] 温暖的水獸作品集 五品知州 (再努力一把就是四品大员了!)
注册时间: 2008-04-23 帖子: 153 来自: 水族箱
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发表于: 星期四 八月 28, 2008 2:34 pm 发表主题: |
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Hi! Strangers:
I've revised my piece again for you. Now, you can see and read my reflection in your mirrors _________________ 舌頭那匹温暖的水獸 馴養地在小小的水族箱中 蠕動
那獸說:是的 我願意 |
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Champagne[Champagne] Champagne作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2007-09-15 帖子: 394 来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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发表于: 星期五 八月 29, 2008 4:12 pm 发表主题: |
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温暖的水獸 写到: |
Hi! Strangers:
I've revised my piece again for you. Now, you can see and read my reflection in your mirrors |
Yes, I did read and see your ubiquitous reflection in my mirror.
温暖的水獸 写到: | All I know is to tell the story
Numerous generations had passed. Eric stayed at home and said, “I don’t know how to find a place to reflect on my life. All I know is to tell the story.” |
My suggestion is as follows:
Numerous generations had passed. Eric stayed at home and said, “I don’t know how to find a place to reflect on my life. All I know is to tell the story.” And so it was done. _________________ I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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