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雪泥 · 发表于: 星期一五月 08, 2006 4:13 am 发表主题: Dusk

Dusk

(Mother's affection)

My lord
Could you give me some strength?
Build for her green branches
Mill fallen leaves into fertile soil
for tulips ,in April

And nightingales should sing
beside her window ,never away
Forget the saddest, forget the swain

His eyes empty without affection-wine ,
you made
It’s delicate, people praised
For romance is a folk tale——
Ran into his lover’s bosom —— he did

I'm weeping under the laurel
Stars disappear ‘cause the sorrow
Only the fragrance still telling how
pretty you once were
Heard it I ponder over:
How can I stop you drinking poisoned love
to quench your thirst?
How can I give pleasure to you, my dearest?

She hides in a dark corner
Drinking the wine so bitter
Has neither singing nightingales,
Neither charming tulips,
Neither luxuriant vines,
Neither love,nor life…
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和平岛 · 发表于: 星期一五月 08, 2006 10:22 am 发表主题:

中西合璧
不光光是语言，更多的是思维方式上的

星子 · 发表于: 星期一五月 08, 2006 9:24 pm 发表主题:

I weeping under the laurel ? weeping?
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雪泥 · 发表于: 星期二五月 09, 2006 2:31 am 发表主题:

星子 · 发表于: 星期二五月 09, 2006 7:15 am 发表主题:

Now, it is ok... I am weeping...
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星子 · 发表于: 星期二五月 09, 2006 10:35 am 发表主题:

喜歡你這樣的風格﹐是有點西洋味。。。。慢慢細讀
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