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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期五 九月 10, 2004 2:15 pm 发表主题: My uncle |
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I fear to visit my uncle,
Since a stroke took away the real one,
A happy and warm soul.
A jouncy figure,
A dull face,
A shaky hand,
A strayed mind…
I hope he never feel what I feel,
I hope my smile to him is real,
But I cannot help weeping in a corner,
And pray for any hope.
Mom told me a lot of stories,
unfolding many of his past misfortune;
Under the firm surface,
that sad and fragile heart hidden…
Now he bears nothing,
the heart was taken away
and the surface was broken.
Through his dark eyes,
I hope to see a smile,
and a peace world. |
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晓鸣[自己的敌人] 晓鸣作品集 Site Admin
注册时间: 2004-05-05 帖子: 9474 来自: 加拿大多伦多
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发表于: 星期六 九月 11, 2004 6:54 am 发表主题: |
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表现得真实,但有点平淡. |
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白水[FAFAFA] 白水作品集 一品翰林院大学士 (酷我!I made it!)
注册时间: 2004-05-16 帖子: 9025 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期六 九月 11, 2004 9:01 am 发表主题: |
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Is his name US... ...? |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期一 九月 13, 2004 2:02 pm 发表主题: |
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白水 写到: | Is his name US... ...? |
Hehe, You always have the wonderful image.
It is for my real uncle...
But I may write another for US to remember the Sep 11.
Thanks for reading. |
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