酷我-北美枫

Hierroenzyme · 发表于: 星期六二月 18, 2006 9:15 am 发表主题: Hero

Would you dance
if I ask you to dance
Would you run
and never look back

Now would you die
for the one you love
Hold me in your love
tonight

I can be your hero
I can kiss away the pain
I would stand by you forever
You took my breath away
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纵马荡枪江山远，一生奋武为红颜

星子 · 发表于: 星期六二月 18, 2006 5:55 pm 发表主题:

Hold me with your love

----it is more like a song ...

poems in my eye, should have more images.
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非马 · 发表于: 星期日二月 19, 2006 10:22 am 发表主题:

同意星子的话。美国《新大陆诗刊》的主编陈铭华竭力反对“诗歌”这个名词，大概就是因为看到这种诗与歌不分家的现象。现代诗应该有更深一层或更高一层的内涵与表现才是。