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雪泥

Spontaneous Combustion

Fiery,
inferno, deep in the core.
Blood burning the veins as it
pulsates throughout the entire body.
Interior regions
of a
human frame,
sizzling, out of control.
Temperature flaming
from inside the soul, heat
so intense, no sweat is
produced.
Recalling the ills rained down
on others, stomach commences
to churn. Swallowing back
bile in attempt to cool
all a form of denial.
Eruption,
flames burning
out of control while
vile soul tries to escape.
Another explosion of one so empty.
Consequence?
Spontaneous Combustion
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雪泥 · 发表于: 星期三一月 04, 2006 3:14 pm 发表主题:

my friend Renne' is a very strong woman at her 50's ,in this piece ,she expressed how her husband was...
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星子 · 发表于: 星期三一月 04, 2006 10:58 pm 发表主题:

较真实地再现了那种冲动和强烈的欲望，但不能激起读者美好的想象和画面感。。。或者心灵感悟。

不知大家读后有何印象?

星子 · 发表于: 星期三一月 04, 2006 11:27 pm 发表主题:

以下是我写的有关此类的。。。可比较

Slip

Our silence grows moss
among the streams.
It falls between tongues
like spines and arrows,
failing to build bridges.

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As Piano

To invite your choir,
I lay down myself as piano;
each inch of my skin
an echo.

When you touch,
listen
and remember
love songs never die.
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