酷我-北美枫

星子 · 发表于: 星期日六月 13, 2004 7:11 am 发表主题: Microscope

My son indulges in it:
a dull grain, or a shiny drip,
He sees the chain of life.

The world unfolds its secret,
his sight goes beyond it.
I see future in magnification.

-------My this poemhighly valued by English Poetry forum, on the final list of contest right now---

晓鸣 · 发表于: 星期日六月 13, 2004 9:55 am 发表主题:

祝贺星子这首在英语诗界得到的荣誉.诗不论语种,精神都是相通的.希望星子为我们献出更多的好诗!

老土 · 发表于: 星期日六月 13, 2004 2:48 pm 发表主题:

What I can say are three words:

AAA

-- Amazing, Admire, Applaud!!

(for all your poems, not only this one)
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星子 · 发表于: 星期一六月 14, 2004 10:24 pm 发表主题:

谢谢大家。

共同努力！

星子 · 发表于: 星期四十月 07, 2004 8:50 am 发表主题:

This one is really good, So I lift it up again. ( for those who never read it)
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