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和平岛[我还没有昵称] 和平岛作品集 一品翰林院大学士 (酷我!I made it!)
注册时间: 2004-05-16 帖子: 5614 来自: Victoria
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发表于: 星期日 十二月 04, 2005 5:18 pm 发表主题: |
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好梦
翻译现代诗歌,不能太拘泥 |
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Blue Ice[FFFFFF] Blue Ice作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2005-05-03 帖子: 146
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发表于: 星期日 十二月 04, 2005 5:35 pm 发表主题: |
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这首诗要署名集体改编了 |
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和平岛[我还没有昵称] 和平岛作品集 一品翰林院大学士 (酷我!I made it!)
注册时间: 2004-05-16 帖子: 5614 来自: Victoria
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发表于: 星期日 十二月 04, 2005 8:37 pm 发表主题: |
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(3)
Intimate
Reading from the distance
How much do I wish to be your dear one!
As a chill wind
blows the rear window open
to starlight
What I can do
is to light up a candle
weeping a soft wish |
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Blue Ice[FFFFFF] Blue Ice作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2005-05-03 帖子: 146
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发表于: 星期日 十二月 04, 2005 9:21 pm 发表主题: |
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和平岛 写到: | (3)
Intimate
Reading from the distance
How much do I wish to be your dear one!-原意是否定, 这变肯定了
--------------------------------------------当"你"被鲜花和掌声簇拥时的"我" 是吹冷风的, 还是没找到
As a chill wind
blows the rear window open
to starlight
What I can do
is to light up a candle
weeping a soft wish |
岛斑, 你改的的确漂亮, 只是好象和我的中文诗歌的原意不太吻合 |
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雪泥[雪泥] 雪泥作品集 四品府丞 (封疆大吏也!)
注册时间: 2005-10-12 帖子: 421 来自: 西欧
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发表于: 星期一 十二月 05, 2005 9:15 am 发表主题: |
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和平岛 写到: | (3)
Intimate
Reading from the distance
How much do I wish to be your dear one!
As a chill wind
blows the rear window open
to starlight
What I can do
is to light up a candle
weeping a soft wish |
岛主,这可以算是你的作品了,同题作。Blue Ice 给你的灵感。 _________________ 雪泥长篇《趟过祖母河》全本
雪泥小说选 新浪连载 |
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和平岛[我还没有昵称] 和平岛作品集 一品翰林院大学士 (酷我!I made it!)
注册时间: 2004-05-16 帖子: 5614 来自: Victoria
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发表于: 星期一 十二月 05, 2005 10:47 am 发表主题: |
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Michelle Reisdorf 写到: | 和平岛 写到: | (3)
Intimate
Reading from the distance
How much do I wish to be your dear one!
As a chill wind
blows the rear window open
to starlight
What I can do
is to light up a candle
weeping a soft wish |
岛主,这可以算是你的作品了,同题作。Blue Ice 给你的灵感。 |
这是我帮蓝冰改的
她原诗歌的意境,远远超过我的译文 |
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Blue Ice[FAFAFA] Blue Ice作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2005-05-03 帖子: 146
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发表于: 星期五 十二月 09, 2005 12:35 pm 发表主题: |
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TO YOU
Poet
For the poetry
he strips himself of all his luxury and nobility
left with poverty and loneliness
I mean
the solemn and fearless one
String player
You touch
mountains and rivers
With strings
I mean, you are pounding
the life
With your blood vessels
Intimate
Reading from the distance
but never hopeing
to be your dear one
North wind blow the rear window
I want to open it quietly
at the very day full of flowers and praises
Let me light a bunch of soft warmth
for you with a weeping candle
at the lonesome and cold night
算留个纪念吧, 谢谢各位朋友的点评和建议 |
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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期五 十二月 09, 2005 5:05 pm 发表主题: |
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Intimate
BaiShui/Toronto,Canada
Reading you afar,
I never hope
To be your dear one
The North wind
Blows at the rear window
I want to open it quietly
To the day full of flowers and praises
Let me light a bunch of soft warmth
For you with a weeping candle
At the lonesome and cold night _________________
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Blue Ice[FAFAFA] Blue Ice作品集 六品通判 (官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
注册时间: 2005-05-03 帖子: 146
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发表于: 星期五 十二月 09, 2005 9:24 pm 发表主题: |
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谢谢星星和各位朋友, 或许将来我会忘记这首诗歌, 但我不会忘记大家的友情 |
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