酷我-北美枫

[星子]

(1) footprints

He left for spring
upon snow covering;
as my being sealed in hibernation.

He left a trace of them with ice cracking,
as my shadow chased with a pair of wing;

Now the rain is drifting,
Spring melts my dream.
I see them twined
at the very beginning.

(2) Spring
When snow begin to melt,
white quiescence trickles.
Willows sprout a tail,
children slosh in a trail.
ducklings tease tiny bubbles,
clouds swag light shadows.
I scatter forget-me-not,
and black soil soaks in the spring drizzle.

[[ANNA]]

(1) footprints

He left for spring
upon snow covering;
as my being sealed in hibernation.

He left a trace of them with ice cracking,
as my shadow chased with a pair of wing;

Now the rain is drifting,
Spring melts my dream.
I see them twined
at the very beginning.

(2) Spring
When snow begin to melt,
white quiescence trickles.
Willows sprout a tail,
children slosh in a trail.
ducklings tease tiny bubbles,
clouds swag light shadows.
I scatter forget-me-not,
and black soil soaks in the spring drizzle.

[和平岛]

春天之雪, 能写出北国的特色, 好

[[我还没有昵称]]

春天之雪, 能写出北国的特色, 好

[晓鸣]

生在江南的人,在写雪时总透露着春天.

[[自己的敌人]]

生在江南的人,在写雪时总透露着春天.

[剑熔]

精短的两首,《足迹》和《春天》比，我更喜欢后者。
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李建荣

[[我还没有昵称]]

精短的两首,《足迹》和《春天》比，我更喜欢后者。
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李建荣

[星子]

Thanks all. We all chase after spring's pace, especially here, winter is too long.

[[ANNA]]

Thanks all. We all chase after spring's pace, especially here, winter is too long.

[李源]

英语是弱项,借助翻译品味到雪和春的意境

[[河北]]

英语是弱项,借助翻译品味到雪和春的意境