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星子[ANNA] 星子作品集 酷我!I made it!
注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto
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发表于: 星期二 八月 10, 2004 12:08 pm 发表主题: Titlte changed to " As is" or "To be" |
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A bird fell down with broken wings,
it was her luck to find a carer.
A rose withered in the drought,
it was her honor to share this sorrow.
A wind bell tangled in the storm,
her man untied her to free her hum.
I wondered if I were
the bird, the rose or the wind bell,
your cold and scorning face was
the only thing I could presume.
But still I would find my heart flying,
my beauty surrounding, my singing soaring.
The fallen was only your shadow,
I would stand with no shame.
-----Titlte changed to " As is" or "To be"--
Which is better?
最后进行编辑的是 星子 on 星期四 八月 12, 2004 12:53 pm, 总计第 2 次编辑 |
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语风万里[爱谁谁] 语风万里作品集 三品按察使 (天,你是斑竹吧?)
注册时间: 2004-07-19 帖子: 877 来自: Beijing,China
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发表于: 星期二 八月 10, 2004 7:08 pm 发表主题: |
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treat me well .treat every one well with mercy.
show smile face,give warm hands.the cold heart will not cry. _________________ 漫是星光,曲水流觞,一肚花雕眼迷茫。
风过回廊,似歌吟唱,半院黄花满院香。
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