酷我-北美枫

[语风万里]

偶斗胆把它翻成中文，还在不断学习ing。不知是否合乎诗歌的意境，有不当之处，还望大家指教！谢谢！


Harmony


I walk through God's garden.
I see flowers’ blossom;
I hear breezes’ rustle;
I feel sunrays’ warmness.

I walk through God's garden.
I see people’s smiles;
I hear music surrounding;
I feel joy inside.

I walk through God's garden.
I see rainbows as bridges;
I hear thunders as trumps;
I feel home as you are calling.

I walk through God's garden.
I wont doubt my destination;
I wont be tempted by evil;
all your steps, I hear, I see and I follow.

I walk through God's garden.
I sing songs from heaven;
I praise you in holy.
I walk in a perfect and eternal garden.


译文：

御花园——慢板随想曲


闲逛伊甸园，怒放百花鲜。风过沙沙响，阳光暖身前。

散步伊甸园，路人露欢颜。仙乐飘落去，吾心舞翩翩。

漫行伊甸园，虹桥荡秋千。惊雷做礼炮，亲朋叙团圆。

徜徉伊甸园，心静欲成仙。责令众精灵，随偶上南天。

走遍伊甸园，丽歌意缠绵。愿侬更妖娆，伴我万斯年。


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漫是星光，曲水流觞，一肚花雕眼迷茫。

风过回廊，似歌吟唱，半院黄花满院香。

[[爱谁谁]]

偶斗胆把它翻成中文，还在不断学习ing。不知是否合乎诗歌的意境，有不当之处，还望大家指教！谢谢！


Harmony


I walk through God's garden.
I see flowers’ blossom;
I hear breezes’ rustle;
I feel sunrays’ warmness.

I walk through God's garden.
I see people’s smiles;
I hear music surrounding;
I feel joy inside.

I walk through God's garden.
I see rainbows as bridges;
I hear thunders as trumps;
I feel home as you are calling.

I walk through God's garden.
I wont doubt my destination;
I wont be tempted by evil;
all your steps, I hear, I see and I follow.

I walk through God's garden.
I sing songs from heaven;
I praise you in holy.
I walk in a perfect and eternal garden.


译文：

御花园——慢板随想曲


闲逛伊甸园，怒放百花鲜。风过沙沙响，阳光暖身前。

散步伊甸园，路人露欢颜。仙乐飘落去，吾心舞翩翩。

漫行伊甸园，虹桥荡秋千。惊雷做礼炮，亲朋叙团圆。

徜徉伊甸园，心静欲成仙。责令众精灵，随偶上南天。

走遍伊甸园，丽歌意缠绵。愿侬更妖娆，伴我万斯年。


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漫是星光，曲水流觞，一肚花雕眼迷茫。

风过回廊，似歌吟唱，半院黄花满院香。

[星子]

我觉得你的译文比原诗好。
我写这首时，总觉得格式和意境还欠单调。。

可读你的，形象生动，意境优美。。
看来我要修改原诗了。。。

呵呵互相学习。。。

[[ANNA]]

我觉得你的译文比原诗好。
我写这首时，总觉得格式和意境还欠单调。。

可读你的，形象生动，意境优美。。
看来我要修改原诗了。。。

呵呵互相学习。。。

[白采水]

服了
没得说
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[[白七]]

服了
没得说
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