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星子 · 酷我！I made it！ 注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto

Through whose winter, I walked?
My heart was frozen there,
I caught a severe cold,
and coughed out black blood.

Through whose winter, I walked?
The road had no end,
light was wrapped in pale colour,
wherever my finger touched, chilly inside.

Through whose winter, I walked?
I met a snowman, tears as cold marbles.
he failed to struggle winter to spring,
with long way behind.

Through whose winter, I walked?
I asked myself,
my memory was melted in an endless white.
Still I hoped spring ahead.

---------Inspired by 拾草's 我走过谁的冬天

和平岛 · 发表于: 星期日七月 18, 2004 10:28 pm 发表主题:

I was melted in an endless white

够劲的 Smile

白水 · 发表于: 星期日七月 18, 2004 10:50 pm 发表主题:

星子 · 发表于: 星期二七月 20, 2004 11:22 am 发表主题:

Thanks all.

Made a little revision.

罗西 · 发表于: 星期二七月 27, 2004 1:25 am 发表主题:

我走过那些人的冬季

I like your poesy
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我看见，我听见，一些记忆被打碎。

星子 · 发表于: 星期二七月 27, 2004 8:48 am 发表主题:

语风万里 · 发表于: 星期二七月 27, 2004 10:08 am 发表主题:

white is the best color in winter,
and snow would be pretty decoration of the winter.

your poem is always gentle and soft with easy . i also like them.
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漫是星光，曲水流觞，一肚花雕眼迷茫。

风过回廊，似歌吟唱，半院黄花满院香。

星子 · 发表于: 星期二七月 27, 2004 10:16 am 发表主题:

Thanks 语风.

论坛是很好的交流和学习的场所。
也多多向你和其它高手取经。。。