酷我-北美枫

[星子]

如果等待是风铃，
我知道你一定会
携风而来，
在我的门扉
摇醒那久远的梦。

可我终会听到吗?
在无数次落花的雨后，
流星样的失聪。。。

拘一把残烛的泪影，
映于窗临，
流失的光阴羽化成尘，
风一吹
逃遁得无影无踪。

--------------Wait----

If wait is a wind-bell,
I know you will come with a wind,
before my window,
and wake up the faraway dream.

But will it be hearable,
after countless raining nights,
all flowers withered,
and petals fallen on the dust?

Still, I will cup the pale candle light,
scatter my trembling shadows behind.
But time goes by so fast,
when the wind blows in the end,
will I disappear as the dust
and leave no trace after?

[[ANNA]]

如果等待是风铃，
我知道你一定会
携风而来，
在我的门扉
摇醒那久远的梦。

可我终会听到吗?
在无数次落花的雨后，
流星样的失聪。。。

拘一把残烛的泪影，
映于窗临，
流失的光阴羽化成尘，
风一吹
逃遁得无影无踪。

--------------Wait----

If wait is a wind-bell,
I know you will come with a wind,
before my window,
and wake up the faraway dream.

But will it be hearable,
after countless raining nights,
all flowers withered,
and petals fallen on the dust?

Still, I will cup the pale candle light,
scatter my trembling shadows behind.
But time goes by so fast,
when the wind blows in the end,
will I disappear as the dust
and leave no trace after?

[晓鸣]

很精细的感受.结尾很好.

[[自己的敌人]]

很精细的感受.结尾很好.

[和平岛]

不是为了等的等
好诗

[[我还没有昵称]]

不是为了等的等
好诗

[星子]

[[ANNA]]

[和平岛]

很细腻的女人心思

[[我还没有昵称]]

很细腻的女人心思

[星子]

Edit with English version, please share your comments.

[[ANNA]]

Edit with English version, please share your comments.

[叶雨]

恭喜你的功力又提升一级！

无论从意境、音韵、构思，都让人十分舒服。

[[FAFAFA]]

恭喜你的功力又提升一级！

无论从意境、音韵、构思，都让人十分舒服。

[星子]

[[ANNA]]

[和平岛]

觉得中文比英文的有韵味

[[我还没有昵称]]

觉得中文比英文的有韵味