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I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe)

 
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二品总督
(刚入二品,小心做人)
二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


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帖子发表于: 星期二 三月 24, 2009 2:54 pm    发表主题: I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe) 引用并回复

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I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe), In Response to Champagne’s i HEAR Calliope Humming?!


Under the blanket
of night,
Calliope and I
do nothing
but chase each other.

I finally catch her;
half of her stiffens
and half melts away.
Every now and then
I hear Calliope humming …
_________________
Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul


最后进行编辑的是 ericcoliu on 星期五 三月 27, 2009 6:53 am, 总计第 1 次编辑
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四品府丞
(封疆大吏也!)
四品府丞<BR>(封疆大吏也!)


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帖子发表于: 星期二 三月 24, 2009 8:02 pm    发表主题: Re: I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe) 引用并回复

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I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe), In Response to Champagne’s i HEAR Calliope Humming?!



In my view, it's an erotic poem for horny Joe, and in defining it as an erotic poem as indicated in the headnote, you run risk of doing something detrimental to the polyvalency of the word Calliope.
_________________
I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy.
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二品总督
(刚入二品,小心做人)
二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


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帖子发表于: 星期三 三月 25, 2009 10:18 am    发表主题: Re: I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe) 引用并回复

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In my view, it's an erotic poem for horny Joe, and in defining it as an erotic poem as indicated in the headnote, you run risk of doing something detrimental to the polyvalency of the word Calliope.


You're being worried too much about my "literary hook."

For anyone who is attentive to my Calliope poems or interested in exploring the possibility of enriching his/her reading experience, s/he would read my poem thoroughly and carefully, which means a contextualized reading.

By the way, 3 out of five of my submitted Calliope poems have been published and two other is still seeking the Shelter of Alphabets.
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七品按察司
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帖子发表于: 星期四 三月 26, 2009 12:22 pm    发表主题: Re: I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe) 引用并回复

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Finally, I catch her;
half of her stiffens
and half melts away.
Every now and then
I hear Calliope humming …


An allusion to I and Calliope in Harmonious Rapture?

throbbing agony
caressed by your hand.
Moans and pain
born to your laughter,
raised in your tears.
_________________
Lines go off in all directions.
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二品总督
(刚入二品,小心做人)
二品总督<BR>(刚入二品,小心做人)


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帖子发表于: 星期五 三月 27, 2009 6:52 am    发表主题: Re: I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe) 引用并回复

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An allusion to I and Calliope in Harmonious Rapture?

throbbing agony
caressed by your hand.
Moans and pain
born to your laughter,
raised in your tears.


Yes.

Thanks for your discerning eye and attentive reading, 川生. You just proved yourself to Champagne that you' re neither average Joe nor horny Joe.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul
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(官儿做大了,保持廉洁哦)
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帖子发表于: 星期一 四月 06, 2009 8:37 pm    发表主题: Re: I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe) 引用并回复

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I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe), In Response to Champagne’s i HEAR Calliope Humming?!

I finally catch her;
half of her stiffens
and half melts away.
Every now and then
I hear Calliope humming …



Below is the response to the concluding stanza:

Pressing his lips
firmly to hers
as she snuggles her face
against him
he feels her two moons
His slow entry and gentle pull-out
is a cat with a chick
in its mouth.
_________________
I came, I saw, and I conquered
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