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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
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来自: GTA, Canada
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 发表于: 星期二 三月 24, 2009 2:54 pm 发表主题: I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe) |
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Reading and Writing: Life on the Page
I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe), In Response to Champagne’s i HEAR Calliope Humming?!
Under the blanket
of night,
Calliope and I
do nothing
but chase each other.
I finally catch her;
half of her stiffens
and half melts away.
Every now and then
I hear Calliope humming …
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul
最后进行编辑的是 ericcoliu on 星期五 三月 27, 2009 6:53 am, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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Champagne[Champagne]
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四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
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来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期二 三月 24, 2009 8:02 pm 发表主题: Re: I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe) |
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| ericcoliu 写到: | Reading and Writing: Life on the Page
I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe), In Response to Champagne’s i HEAR Calliope Humming?!
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In my view, it's an erotic poem for horny Joe, and in defining it as an erotic poem as indicated in the headnote, you run risk of doing something detrimental to the polyvalency of the word Calliope.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
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来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期三 三月 25, 2009 10:18 am 发表主题: Re: I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe) |
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In my view, it's an erotic poem for horny Joe, and in defining it as an erotic poem as indicated in the headnote, you run risk of doing something detrimental to the polyvalency of the word Calliope. |
You're being worried too much about my "literary hook."
For anyone who is attentive to my Calliope poems or interested in exploring the possibility of enriching his/her reading experience, s/he would read my poem thoroughly and carefully, which means a contextualized reading.
By the way, 3 out of five of my submitted Calliope poems have been published and two other is still seeking the Shelter of Alphabets.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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川生[川生]
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七品按察司
（我开始管这里的事儿了）
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| 发表于: 星期四 三月 26, 2009 12:22 pm 发表主题: Re: I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe) |
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Finally, I catch her;
half of her stiffens
and half melts away.
Every now and then
I hear Calliope humming … |
An allusion to I and Calliope in Harmonious Rapture?
throbbing agony
caressed by your hand.
Moans and pain
born to your laughter,
raised in your tears.
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Lines go off in all directions. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
ericcoliu作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2007-05-29
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来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期五 三月 27, 2009 6:52 am 发表主题: Re: I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe) |
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An allusion to I and Calliope in Harmonious Rapture?
throbbing agony
caressed by your hand.
Moans and pain
born to your laughter,
raised in your tears. |
Yes.
Thanks for your discerning eye and attentive reading, 川生. You just proved yourself to Champagne that you' re neither average Joe nor horny Joe.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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hahaview[hahaview]
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六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
注册时间: 2008-02-07
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| 发表于: 星期一 四月 06, 2009 8:37 pm 发表主题: Re: I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe) |
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I Hear Calliope Humming (Erotic Poem for Average Joe), In Response to Champagne’s i HEAR Calliope Humming?!
I finally catch her;
half of her stiffens
and half melts away.
Every now and then
I hear Calliope humming … |
Below is the response to the concluding stanza:
Pressing his lips
firmly to hers
as she snuggles her face
against him
he feels her two moons
His slow entry and gentle pull-out
is a cat with a chick
in its mouth.
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I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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