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温暖的水獸[温暖的水獸]
温暖的水獸作品集
五品知州
（再努力一把就是四品大员了！）
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来自: 水族箱
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 发表于: 星期四 二月 19, 2009 5:07 pm 发表主题: Toran-ten (Commemoration of Toronto's 175th Birthday, 3 v.) |
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Toran-ten
This is Toran-ten --
People coming,
going,
living,
moving;
resident,
migrant,
known,
unknown --
united in diverse goals.
Toran-ten by Champagne
This is Toran-ten
where people come and go.
Exchanging warm glances and cold looks,
residents and visitors meet and part.
Live with Toronto (in summer) by Champagne
Toronto is thick with dreams. The streets are layered with stories, dense with emotions and desires. The display windows are covered with fantasies, replete with imagination and frustration. Above the skyscrapers are clouded with PC talks hanging there like smog.
Note:
The origin of the name "Toronto" comes from the Huron word toran-ten, which literally means meeting place.
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舌頭那匹温暖的水獸 馴養地在小小的水族箱中 蠕動
那獸說：是的 我願意
最后进行编辑的是 温暖的水獸 on 星期四 四月 09, 2009 3:32 pm, 总计第 3 次编辑 |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
ericcoliu作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2007-05-29
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来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期四 二月 19, 2009 9:16 pm 发表主题: Re: Toran-ten |
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Toran-ten
People coming,
going,
living,
moving;
resident,
migrant,
known,
unknown --
united in diverse goals.
This is our meeting place --
Toran-ten.
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might be
This is Toran-ten --
People coming,
going,
living,
moving;
resident,
migrant,
known,
unknown --
united in diverse goals.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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christine[christine]
christine作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2008-02-25
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| 发表于: 星期五 二月 20, 2009 7:51 pm 发表主题: Re: Toran-ten |
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might be
This is Toran-ten --
People coming,
going,
living,
moving;
resident,
migrant,
known,
unknown --
united in diverse goals. |
I concur!
The repetition of words ending in "ing" gives a special kind of rhythm to the poem. |
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
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来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期六 二月 21, 2009 8:06 am 发表主题: Re: Toran-ten |
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might be
This is Toran-ten --
People coming,
going,
living,
moving;
resident,
migrant,
known,
unknown --
united in diverse goals. |
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This is Toran-ten
where people come and go.
Exchanging warm glances and cold looks,
residents and visitors meet and part.
By the way, IMHO, your title is not inviting.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
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| 发表于: 星期五 三月 06, 2009 8:35 pm 发表主题: |
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Today, Toronto marks 175th birthday.
Live with Toronto (in summer)
Toronto is thick with dreams. The streets are layered with stories, dense with emotions and desires. The display windows are covered with fantasies, replete with imagination and frustration. Above the skyscrapers are clouded with PC talks hanging there like smog.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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浴恩福[浴恩福]
浴恩福作品集
六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
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| 发表于: 星期三 三月 18, 2009 1:22 pm 发表主题: Re: Toran-ten (Commemoration of Toronto's 175th Birthday) |
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| 温暖的水獸 写到: | Toran-ten
People coming,
going,
living,
moving;
resident,
migrant,
known,
unknown --
united in diverse goals.
This is our meeting place --
Toran-ten.
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This is a politically correct slogan used by politicians.
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報三恩、耕三大福田 |
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温暖的水獸[温暖的水獸]
温暖的水獸作品集
五品知州
（再努力一把就是四品大员了！）
注册时间: 2008-04-23
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来自: 水族箱
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| 发表于: 星期一 三月 23, 2009 12:33 pm 发表主题: Re: Toran-ten |
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might be
This is Toran-ten --
People coming,
going,
living,
moving;
resident,
migrant,
known,
unknown --
united in diverse goals. |
Thanks! I've edited my poem accordingly.
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舌頭那匹温暖的水獸 馴養地在小小的水族箱中 蠕動
那獸說：是的 我願意 |
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温暖的水獸[温暖的水獸]
温暖的水獸作品集
五品知州
（再努力一把就是四品大员了！）
注册时间: 2008-04-23
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来自: 水族箱
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| 发表于: 星期四 四月 09, 2009 3:35 pm 发表主题: Re: Toran-ten (Commemoration of Toronto's 175th Birthday) |
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[This is a politically correct slogan used by politicians. |
Did you read the title carefully?
This poem is written for commemoration of Toronto's 175th birthday.
Our heritage is unity and diversity.
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舌頭那匹温暖的水獸 馴養地在小小的水族箱中 蠕動
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