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dundas[dundas]
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五品知州
（再努力一把就是四品大员了！）
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Good and heartfelt discussions.
Here is my version of The NeverEnding Story
Once there was a school.
In the school there was the classroom.
In the classroom there was the young teacher
Reciting the story:
'Once there was a school
In the school there was the classroom …’
All of a sudden, he was stuck in the middle of a sentence, and felt his heart beat slow and his brain freeze. Unexpectedly, he fell down on the floor. The silence seized the whole class; then they ran out of the classroom, yelling for help.
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My throat knew thirst before the structure
Of skin and vein around the well |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2007-05-29
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来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期三 六月 25, 2008 8:02 am 发表主题: |
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Here is my version of The NeverEnding Story
Once there was a school.
In the school there was the classroom.
In the classroom there was the young teacher
Reciting the story:
'Once there was a school
In the school there was the classroom …’
All of a sudden, he was stuck in the middle of a sentence, and felt his heart beat slow and his brain freeze. Unexpectedly, he fell down on the floor. The silence seized the whole class; then they ran out of the classroom, yelling for help. |
Two defining words.
The collapse of a school of standardized education.
Don't you think your version of the story is a little bit of wishful thinking?
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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浴恩福[浴恩福]
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六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
注册时间: 2008-05-08
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来自: 多倫多
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| 发表于: 星期四 六月 26, 2008 4:45 pm 发表主题: |
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My Version of The NeverEnding Story:
Once there was a mountain.
In the mountain there was a rundown school.
In the school there were abandoned classrooms
Covered by unknown weeds.
Silence and nature took full control of them.
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報三恩、耕三大福田 |
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浴恩福[浴恩福]
浴恩福作品集
六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
注册时间: 2008-05-08
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来自: 多倫多
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For example, in the case of my poem, The NeverEnding Story, an attentive reader will at least ask the following questions:
1 NeverEnding is an English word which you cannot find in any English dictionary because it’s a word coined by the English translator of the German novel, Die unendliche Geschichte, written by Michael Ende. But you can find the compound word, never-ending, in any English dictionary. Why the translator coined this word?
2 What is/are the connotative meaning(s) of the title of the poem?
3 Since I openly admit I steal the title from the above-mentioned German novel, what is the intertexual relationship of my poem to it?
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The answers to these three questions above are imagination, imagination, and NeverEnding imagination.
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
ericcoliu作品集
二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2007-05-29
帖子: 1393
来自: GTA, Canada
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The answers to these three questions above are imagination, imagination, and NeverEnding imagination. |
Yes, a sharp eye for my questions.
Imagination is the defining word of The NeverEnding Story.
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My Version of The NeverEnding Story:
Once there was a mountain.
In the mountain there was a rundown school.
In the school there were abandoned classrooms
Covered by unknown weeds.
Silence and nature took full control of them. |
The abandonment of a school of cram education portrayed in Chen Kaige's King of Children.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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