酷我-北美枫

[钓月]

Cold heels
Tap out a metallic rhythm.
Quiet streets
Empty the confused heart.
Here's the parting place.
I look at you, you at the moon.


别 月

冷冷的鞋跟
敲出金属音响
静谧的街道
空了攘乱心房
到了分手地方
我望你，你望月亮
_________________
欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮

http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875

[[Fishmoon]]

Cold heels
Tap out a metallic rhythm.
Quiet streets
Empty the confused heart.
Here's the parting place.
I look at you, you at the moon.


别 月

冷冷的鞋跟
敲出金属音响
静谧的街道
空了攘乱心房
到了分手地方
我望你，你望月亮
_________________
欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮

http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875

[ericcoliu]

[[ericcoliu]]

[钓月]

It's very kind of you.
The rhythm is a particular one. It's better to add a before the phrase.
If at is not added, it's easily confused.
Thanks a lot.
_________________
欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮

http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875

[[Fishmoon]]

It's very kind of you.
The rhythm is a particular one. It's better to add a before the phrase.
If at is not added, it's easily confused.
Thanks a lot.
_________________
欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮

http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875

[南柯舟]

余韵悠长，绕梁三日！
_________________
诗歌可能是一种唯一生活在世间的生命与精神密切交流的暗夜中的幽灵，它是存在活生生的生命的文学体裁，它的眼睛能看到你我的灵魂，并游走在你我精神、魂魄、肉体的四周。 真正的真善美是敢于裸露的，放眼苍穹看去星空，那才是真爱、真善、真美。——南柯舟

[[南柯舟]]

余韵悠长，绕梁三日！
_________________
诗歌可能是一种唯一生活在世间的生命与精神密切交流的暗夜中的幽灵，它是存在活生生的生命的文学体裁，它的眼睛能看到你我的灵魂，并游走在你我精神、魂魄、肉体的四周。 真正的真善美是敢于裸露的，放眼苍穹看去星空，那才是真爱、真善、真美。——南柯舟

[钓月]

[[Fishmoon]]