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redshoe[redshoe]
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九品县令
（一不小心，做了官儿了。）
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 发表于: 星期一 三月 10, 2008 7:41 pm 发表主题: Samsara |
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Samsara
I tell you my dream
While you reveal me your dream.
Both of us sharing our dreams
could be from the same dream.
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I am a butterfly drunk with life.
最后进行编辑的是 redshoe on 星期二 三月 11, 2008 7:02 pm, 总计第 1 次编辑 |
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redshoe[redshoe]
redshoe作品集
九品县令
（一不小心，做了官儿了。）
注册时间: 2008-02-13
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| 发表于: 星期一 三月 10, 2008 7:46 pm 发表主题: Re: Samsara |
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I am a butterfly drunk with life.
最后进行编辑的是 redshoe on 星期二 三月 11, 2008 7:02 pm, 总计第 2 次编辑 |
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redshoe[redshoe]
redshoe作品集
九品县令
（一不小心，做了官儿了。）
注册时间: 2008-02-13
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| 发表于: 星期一 三月 10, 2008 7:47 pm 发表主题: Re: Samsara |
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Samsara is derived from "to flow together", or "to go through states."
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I am a butterfly drunk with life. |
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ericcoliu[ericcoliu]
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二品总督
（刚入二品，小心做人）
注册时间: 2007-05-29
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来自: GTA, Canada
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| 发表于: 星期一 三月 10, 2008 11:16 pm 发表主题: |
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There are two versions of your poem. Which version do you prefer?
I like the second one.
you reflect me your dreams? It sounds strange.
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Time is nothing but a disquiet of the soul |
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Champagne[Champagne]
Champagne作品集
四品府丞
（封疆大吏也！）
注册时间: 2007-09-15
帖子: 394
来自: Nowhere & Everywhere
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| 发表于: 星期二 三月 11, 2008 7:58 am 发表主题: Re: Samsara |
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you reflect me your dreams? It sounds strange. |
What do you think the following lines:
I tell you my dream
while you reveal me your dream.
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I'm Champagne,
Bottled poetry with sparkling joy. |
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hahaview[hahaview]
hahaview作品集
六品通判
（官儿做大了，保持廉洁哦）
注册时间: 2008-02-07
帖子: 103
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| 发表于: 星期二 三月 11, 2008 1:30 pm 发表主题: Re: Samsara |
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Samsara
Both of us sharing our dreams
could be from the same dream. |
By detachment from appearances, abide in Real Truth. So I tell you, Thus
shall you think of all this fleeting world,
A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream;
A flash of lightning in a summer cloud,
A flickering lamp, a phantom, a dream.
-- Buddhism. Diamond Sutra 32
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I came, I saw, and I conquered |
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redshoe[redshoe]
redshoe作品集
九品县令
（一不小心，做了官儿了。）
注册时间: 2008-02-13
帖子: 28
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| 发表于: 星期二 三月 11, 2008 7:04 pm 发表主题: |
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| ericcoliu 写到: | There are two versions of your poem. Which version do you prefer?
I like the second one.
you reflect me your dreams? It sounds strange. |
The second one is supposed to be a revised version.
I have made some changes.
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I am a butterfly drunk with life. |
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