酷我-北美枫

星子 · 酷我！I made it！ 注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto

----Mourning for a chinese writer:Iris Chang --

How long will I hold up?
I feel your ashes around me.
Your song of life can't be accomplished,
I hear the wind blow it away.

Time is an empty piano,
losing its tune.
What slips through our fingers
dreams or eternity?

My heart falls
with your fleeting existence.

--
This is on final list on http://www.mattia.ca/contest/finalists5.html

(the previous contest I also have " The moment" And "Microscope" on the final list....)

This is a open and public contest. I know it is difficult to win. On the final list I am already happy.

---中文版
我还能坚持多久，
我能感觉到灰烬，
生命的歌唱不到尽头，
我听见风把它带走?

什么是空茫，
什么是流连，
光阴是一架摆空的琴，
我听不见键击的乐音。。。

从我的手指滑落的，
是梦，抑或永生?
心是否追坠，
那不朽的灵魂?

星子 · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 10:21 am 发表主题:

另一好消息。。。我的另二首在诗集上发表了。。

发表在 On the " We are T.O.Ps"

Through whose winter, I walked?
My heart was frozen there,
I caught a severe cold,
and coughed out black blood.

The road had no end,
light was wrapped in pale colour,
wherever my finger touched, chilly inside.

I met a snowman, tears as cold marbles.
he failed to struggle winter to spring,
with a long way behind.

Whose winter was it ? I wondered.
my memory was melted in an endless white.
Still I hoped spring ahead.

另一首 “The end of love" 在另一诗集上。。。

When love is close to an end,
I wish it will evaporate,
rise to the sky and kiss the clouds.
Then it will leave no trace,
in my wilted memory.

Like a mourning bird,my heart is chasing after.
The vapor will envelop the cloud,
yet the shadow droops down.
I will be still as a dark hill,
hoping the light breaks through;
But the rain pours down,
pitilessly snapping my wings;
My sorrow will grow as a river,
flooded with broken feathers.

When love is close to the end,
I wish I would be a vapor,
to rise up to the sky and kiss the clouds.
Then I would be the rain,
to whip you in its falling.

Then... gliding with new wings,
I will embrace a rainbow dream.

叶霜 · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 10:29 am 发表主题:

恭喜星子！
为你感到骄傲！
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舟山，魂牵梦萦的故乡……

icecanadaice · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 10:33 am 发表主题:

Congratulation!
I am proud of you!
It is your time! Good luck!

countryroad · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 10:42 am 发表主题:

欢迎加入“流行诗”阵营。

--- Pop Poem Association of Canada

何兆龙 · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 10:46 am 发表主题:

Happy for you Anna and proud of you. Envy you of course.

和平岛 · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 11:05 am 发表主题:

可喜可贺!
预祝成功呀!

晓鸣 · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 11:46 am 发表主题:

祝贺!

星子 · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 12:32 pm 发表主题:

Thanks all.

I will keep on writing...

hope it blooms.
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icecanadaice · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 1:21 pm 发表主题:

星子啊,我总觉得这么喜的事,光说说庆贺还不过瘾,好像应该出去狂撮一顿,喝点酒什么的!!??哈

星子 · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 1:27 pm 发表主题:

icecanadaice · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 1:37 pm 发表主题:

这官儿是谁给我封的,偶不想当官儿哎.再说当官儿的哪儿有几个洁身自好的呀!
铭记星子教诲,时刻注意酒这东东的误事毛病,开车时一定不碰它!西西

星子 · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 1:45 pm 发表主题:

icecanadaice · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 1:50 pm 发表主题:

星子啊,一定提前通知我呀,恭候才女美眉大驾光临!西西

白水 · 发表于: 星期四一月 20, 2005 8:53 pm 发表主题:

祝贺你, 星星