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timmid · 发表于: 星期三十月 27, 2004 8:23 am 发表主题: 树的秘密

树的秘密

以前一个人有了秘密
就会进山里找一棵树
在树上挖一个洞
把它倾诉在洞里
以前我在山里见到一棵树
有洞的树
以前我在人群中看到一个人
有秘密的人

离开以前要用多久啊
一瞬或是一生
一个人一列车一条道
有一棵树随风摇曳
有一个人目光闪烁
我这样遭遇过它们
一个人一棵树一个洞
和秘密
和过去
和我自己
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星子 · 发表于: 星期三十月 27, 2004 8:33 am 发表主题:

Good. I also head this kind of story. I like the ending.
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timmid · 发表于: 星期三十月 27, 2004 8:54 am 发表主题:

the film 2046 touched me a little bit. I borrowed some lines and made them my own in this poem, if i may call it that. the other day, when i read 星子' poems, i found something remote but familiar, remote in that the plain wording with wonderful richness has bypassed me for so long, familiar in that I did have such a try, though awkwardly maybe. Then i presented some works i did a couple of years ago, and again i would like to go further in this direction. i hope this change can make a difference. thanks to you people here.
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星子 · 发表于: 星期三十月 27, 2004 9:22 am 发表主题:

Write down your dream there, one day it will grow as the big tree.

I now have a very possible dream, and I will go for it...

Because I find my passion and happiness there.
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