酷我-北美枫

星子 · 酷我！I made it！ 注册时间: 2004-06-05 帖子: 13192 来自: Toronto

Dream

At last we are invisible,
but who cares,
we are always blind,
chewing the sight and distance
with damp silence.

Waves upon waves,
the wind bites my tongue,
and blows leaves away,
I see us, two etched rocks.
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星子 · 发表于: 星期三六月 21, 2006 8:15 pm 发表主题:

Poems

Holding the sand sieve,
I sift them hard.
Call me insane,
it never bothers me--
I hunt for the rest
to belong.

I will mold them into a necklace
with a heart shape,
and hang it inside,
close to my breast.

Don't say they are untouchable,
Yes, they are.
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星子 · 发表于: 星期三六月 21, 2006 8:26 pm 发表主题:

Ego

Shadow hidden,
trunk stands,
I call you the elephant.

Huddled inside,
I am contented.
nose high.

Yet the sunlight touches,
you shrink without a word.
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叶雨 · 发表于: 星期三六月 21, 2006 9:06 pm 发表主题:

朦胧的梦境，烟雨中的摸索。
美的女性文字，敏感的女性触觉。

星子 · 发表于: 星期三六月 21, 2006 9:43 pm 发表主题:

haha-----your comments are more blur....

Thanks
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星子 · 发表于: 星期二七月 04, 2006 10:02 pm 发表主题:

今晚去了workshop,

读了这几首，，，收到一些建议，修改了一下。。。学到了不少东西。。。。

比如 breast 单复数的不同含义---- 等等
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