酷我-北美枫 酷我-北美枫主页||酷我博客    常见问题与解答 (FAQ)   搜索   成员列表   成员组   注册   个人资料   登陆查看您的私人留言   登陆  Blogs(博客)    搜索到 83 个符合的内容 酷我-北美枫 首页 作者 留言   主题: Thoughts on a Wintry Morning clair 回响: 5 阅读: 9678 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期三 三月 18, 2009 10:39 am   主题: Thoughts on a Wintry Morning ah   主题: Calligraphy of Geese (WPF Hall of Fame Honorable Mention) clair 回响: 13 阅读: 23163 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期三 三月 18, 2009 10:38 am   主题: Re: Calligraphy of Geese (Listed as an Honorable Mention) ericcoliu 写到: Your skein of geese is a wonderful poem. Bird-calligraphy . . . I love the idea, and what you have done with it. Your explanation, too, is absolutely fascinating. -- Jane R&oslash;ken I like this idea, too. And your poem reminds me of the collection of concrete poetry by a French poet (sorry, I forgot his name)   主题: Winged Migration (revised) clair 回响: 9 阅读: 15841 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期三 三月 18, 2009 10:36 am   主题: Re: Winged Migration ericcoliu 写到: Upon second reading, I think “yet” would be better than “and” in S1L4. Yes, I concur! I like this idea of a "portable home" explored in your poem.   主题: Ramblings of a Fatigued Poet (published in American Tanka) clair 回响: 11 阅读: 19391 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期三 三月 18, 2009 10:34 am   主题: Re: Ramblings of a Fatigued Poet: My Life with Calliope ericcoliu 写到: Below is the reply from the moderator for Wild Poetry Forum: "My favorite was the fifth, Chen-ou. You really got to something most unusual there. I've read about divorce many times, but the mouth opening, closing and salivating were not things I'd seen before. And the image is one with much impact. " Yes, I concur! I love and disgust this imagery of a man who salivates when talking/ complaining. May I ask who he is?   主题: He/She(For Readers Who Have Active Intelligent imaginations) clair 回响: 7 阅读: 11066 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期三 三月 18, 2009 10:28 am   主题: Re: He/She(For Readers Who Have Active Intelligent imaginati clair 写到: What she said is the mirroered reflection of what he said. Furthermore, the poem challenges the reader to think why the same utterance can have completely different meanings when spoken by people of opposite sexes.   主题: Thoughts on a Wintry Morning clair 回响: 5 阅读: 9678 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期四 三月 12, 2009 12:48 pm   主题: Thoughts on a Wintry Morning   主题: Life Sketches (new, published by Tanka Society of America) clair 回响: 21 阅读: 25471 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期四 三月 12, 2009 12:46 pm   主题: Re: Life Sketches (new, published by Tanka Society of Americ ericcoliu 写到: IV distressed in the wake of a dream -- I hear time passing in the sound of snow V buried earth a silver carpet -- maples and I gaze at the barrenness we see in each other The lines marked above are my favorite ones. Here is my "sketches of this chilling winter:" Thoughts on a wintry morning I Snowflakes falling from the sky from time to time seem to dance out of my sight II Bush fled before the onslaught of winter Obama must shovel the sidewalks of Wall Street   主题: The Winter of My Discontent (published in Word Catalyst) clair 回响: 23 阅读: 27677 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期四 三月 12, 2009 12:44 pm   主题: The Winter of My Discontent (published in Word Catalyst) Here is my "discontent:" Thoughts on a wintry morning I Snowflakes falling from the sky from time to time seem to dance out of my sight II Bush fled before the onslaught of winter Obama must shovel the sidewalks of Wall Street   主题: He/She(For Readers Who Have Active Intelligent imaginations) clair 回响: 7 阅读: 11066 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期四 三月 12, 2009 12:41 pm   主题: Re: He/She(For Readers Who Have Active Intelligent imaginati ericcoliu 写到: Its title implies this poem centers on the politics of self: gender, image. and power. Brilliantly put. What she said is a reflection of what he said.   主题: Your World of Words (revised) clair 回响: 8 阅读: 10604 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期六 一月 24, 2009 9:25 am   主题: Your World of Words (revised) Thanks for the read and your helpful suggestion. I've revised my poem accordingly.   主题: A Struggling Poet Writes a Wordless Poem (revised) clair 回响: 7 阅读: 7846 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期六 一月 24, 2009 9:23 am   主题: Re: A Struggling Poet Writes a Wordless Poem ericcoliu 写到: The word, wordless, has multiple meanings in my poem, none of which is worthless. In my view, it functions as a reminder of "reading between the lines."   主题: Poetic Appropriation (Haiku) clair 回响: 11 阅读: 12848 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期六 一月 24, 2009 9:19 am   主题: Re: Poetic Plagiarism (Haiku) [quote="ericcoliu"] 川生 写到: Poetic Plagiarism (Haiku) Poets contemplate the frog -- images, metaphors, and allusions are stolen in inspiration. IMHO, this is a bad word choice. “If a haiku is a good one, it doesn’t matter if the subject has been used before. The writing of variations on certain subjects in haiku, sometimes using the same or similar phrases (or even changing a few words of a previous haiku), is one of the most interesting challenge the genre offers a poet and can result in refreshingly different ways of “seeing anew” for the reader. This is an aspect of traditional Japanese haiku which is hard for many Westerns, with their ideas of uniqueness and Romantic individualism, to accept. But some of the most original voices in haiku do not hesitate to dare seeming derivative if they see a way of reworking an “old” image.” -- The opening paragraph of ‘A Note on the Selection and Layout of the Poems’ to The Haiku Anthology edited by Cor van den Heuvel A piece of playful writing got a lengthy yet "thoughtful" response from a "serious" writer. How about "reworked?"   主题: The Chicken and Egg Question(Anthologized in Summer Tapesty) clair 回响: 14 阅读: 11904 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期六 一月 24, 2009 9:16 am   主题: Re: The Chicken and Egg Question ericcoliu 写到: robarts 写到: This is an excellent example to explain that there is something unexplainable about existential angst, no matter how much schooling one gets. Yes, knowledge cannot resolve existential angst. As Becker (1973) points out: The knowledge of death is reflective and conceptual, and animals are spared it ... But to live a whole lifetime with the fate of death haunting one's dreams and even the most sunfilled days—that's something else ...everything a man does in his symbolic world is an attempt to deny and overcome his grotesque. Yes, born towards dying! ericcoliu 写到: The Chicken and Egg Question was anthologized in Summer Tapestry, which was published this month. This is the first time my short story appears in book form. Congratulations on the publication of your short story, which engages and stirs the reader's emotions and imagination.   主题: Your World of Words (revised) clair 回响: 8 阅读: 10604 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期四 十二月 11, 2008 3:56 pm   主题: Your World of Words (revised) Thank all of you for your insightful comments. Special thanks to Lake for the helpful suggestion and to ericcoliu for his poetic response. 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