酷我-北美枫 酷我-北美枫主页||酷我博客    常见问题与解答 (FAQ)   搜索   成员列表   成员组   注册   个人资料   登陆查看您的私人留言   登陆  Blogs(博客)    搜索到 15 个符合的内容 酷我-北美枫 首页 作者 留言   主题: Myriad Leaves of words agincourt 回响: 3 阅读: 7139 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期四 四月 09, 2009 2:21 pm   主题: Myriad Leaves of words Myriad Leaves of words sorrow and joy -- into the myriad leaves of words seeds in heart and mind grow   主题: I'm Nobody! Who are you? agincourt 回响: 6 阅读: 12237 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期四 四月 09, 2009 2:19 pm   主题: I'm Nobody! Who are you? I like the third version. I've always been intrigued by Dickinson’s unique way of use of capitalization and punctuation.She often arranges lines of verse in unusual ways and seemingly sporadically employs dashes to signal a break in a line of a poem.   主题: Ramblings of a Fatigued Poet (published in American Tanka) agincourt 回响: 11 阅读: 19391 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期四 四月 09, 2009 2:12 pm   主题: Re: Ramblings of a Fatigued Poet: My Life with Calliope ericcoliu 写到: III a garden blossoms hues fluctuate as seasons go so does your heart to me I love this tanka that conveys a sense of transience: the flower of the human heart.   主题: New Year’s Blues (Tanka String) agincourt 回响: 7 阅读: 11076 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期一 二月 23, 2009 1:50 pm   主题: New Year’s Blues (Tanka String) ericcoliu 写到: Here is my take: New Year's embers have fallen into stillness -- a crying cat pierces the night Thanks for your poetic reply to my tanka. I like your tanka.   主题: Poetic Appropriation (Haiku) agincourt 回响: 11 阅读: 12848 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期一 二月 23, 2009 1:49 pm   主题: Re: Poetic Plagiarism (Haiku) ericcoliu 写到: The term appropriation, as used in Borrowed Words by Elisa Martí-López, acknowledges the processes of literary borrowings and analyzes them as a “deep and productive” influence able to generate a “further creative development” of another’s discourse in a new context and under new conditions. Thanks for the explanation. I like the revision.   主题: The Rainbow Balloons Man agincourt 回响: 6 阅读: 11584 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期一 二月 23, 2009 1:47 pm   主题: Re: The Rainbow Balloons Man ericcoliu 写到: Did you really think a man who "never asked anything from [his parents]" would make a promise so easily? So, did you mean that "he" would help restore "her confidence" in relationships or trust?   主题: Winning Tanka of 2008 International Erotic Tanka Contest agincourt 回响: 10 阅读: 17674 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期一 二月 23, 2009 1:43 pm   主题: Re: Winners of the First International Erotic Tanka Contest fanfan 写到: [What do you think of these poems? Are they good enough? It depends on your definition of "erotic."   主题: New Year’s Blues (Tanka String) agincourt 回响: 7 阅读: 11076 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期一 二月 09, 2009 4:26 pm   主题: New Year’s Blues (Tanka String) Thank you all for your valuable comments. Many thanks to ericcoliu for your detailed explanation of how to write tanka in English and to 浴恩福 for helping me polish my tanka.   主题: Rexroth-esque understanding of Asian Poetries (2nd draft) agincourt 回响: 8 阅读: 14696 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期一 二月 09, 2009 4:22 pm   主题: Re: Speak of This to No One:Rexrothesque understanding of Po fanfan 写到: His Buddhist-influenced critique of imagery and symbols, which fails to consider contextual factors, has been widely used by his fellow poets and readers. As one of the first poets in the United States to explore Japanese haiku, Rexroth helped “de-contextualize” its reading and understanding. This is one of the main reasons why Basho’s frog haiku is much loved and yet little understood by haiku readers. Can you elaborate more about this issue?   主题: Life Sketches (new, published by Tanka Society of America) agincourt 回响: 21 阅读: 25471 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期一 二月 09, 2009 4:17 pm   主题: Life Sketches (new, published by Tanka Society of America) ericcoliu 写到: I for years now I have known you -- chance glimpses through gaps in the fence in the backyard ericcoliu 写到: Writing Tanka in English Structurally speaking, I follow Michael McClintock’s conception of tanka in the “taika” style, which combines a three-line haiku in typical objective language with two additional lines that further develop the imagery and usually introduce a lyrical, subjective element. In most cases, the three-line unit could stand alone as a haiku, while the two-line unit is dependent on the other for its meaning and context. ericcoliu 写到: Chen-ou, the queen of forms. Done right the msot beautiful ever writen. The things I look for most are (1) L1-3 and L3-5 can stand alone with the former haiku like, the later most emotional/personal. -- Gary Blankenship I agree with Gary. The third line is the pivot line, not just the beginning line of a three-line unit but also the the concluding line of a two-line unit. By the way, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your tanka submitted to TSA.   主题: Blow, Blow, Thou Winter Wind (revised) agincourt 回响: 6 阅读: 10761 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期一 二月 09, 2009 4:11 pm   主题: Blow, Blow, Thou Winter Wind (revised) Is this a tanka? I think so. I am not sure of your use of abstract words in a tanka?   主题: New Year’s Blues (Tanka String) agincourt 回响: 7 阅读: 11076 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期四 一月 29, 2009 2:39 pm   主题: Re: New Year’s Blues (Tanka) 温暖的水獸 写到: IMHO, your tanka is a little lengthy; it's better not to exceed 20 English words or syllables. Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm not aware of the word limit for a tanka. Is this one of writing conventions practiced by tankaists?   主题: S e x Talk agincourt 回响: 11 阅读: 11693 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期四 一月 29, 2009 2:35 pm   主题: Re: S e x Talk 温暖的水獸 写到: II taking off clothes, we fully engage in conversation Your poems read like aphorisms, the second of which is thought-evoking and plays with its title: "s e x" (intercourse) and "talk" (conversation).   主题: Mourning John Updike: One Last Breath agincourt 回响: 4 阅读: 6030 论坛: English Garden   发表于: 星期四 一月 29, 2009 2:31 pm   主题: Re: Mourning John Updike: One Last Breath ericcoliu 写到: For life’s a shabby subterfuge, And death is real, and dark, and huge. The shock of it will register Nowhere but where it will occur. II We all, even Jesus, go six feet under. Why do you struggle? There is a dialectical tension between your reply and Updike's concludinh lines. 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