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 主题: Dream of Peace - 永和平梦想 |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 4 阅读: 6000 |
 论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期四 五月 08, 2008 3:32 am 主题: Dream of Peace - 永和平梦想 |
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Hi again Anna, Thank you so much for fixing my little poem! My use of Chinese language is still very poor - I really must try harder. I'm now lucky enough to spend the summers in Kunming where I am now and winters down in Malaysia. Great fun! with kind regards Colin |
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| 主题: Dream of Peace - 永和平梦想 |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 4 阅读: 6000 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期三 五月 07, 2008 9:07 pm 主题: Dream of Peace - 永和平梦想 |
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| Hi folks,
I'd much appreciate any feedback on my attempt at translating a little English poem of mine. 永和平梦想 生存只短命 在尽善尽美 而后消失快 有如忘前途 A dream of peace. There for a moment, a thing of beauty. Then faded away like the forgotten hopes of youth. 谢谢您 Colin |
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| 主题: 看病最好 |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 6 阅读: 8023 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期二 四月 17, 2007 2:31 am 主题: Re: 看病最好 |
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Yes you're right, of course, 我突然病了 is better and I've changed it. I guess I was trying too hard to make it rhyme. many thanks Colin |
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| 主题: 看病最好 |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 6 阅读: 8023 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期二 四月 17, 2007 12:58 am 主题: 看病最好 |
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Hi Lake, 谢谢 with kind regards Colin |
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| 主题: 看病最好 |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 6 阅读: 8023 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期二 四月 10, 2007 8:20 am 主题: Thanks Anna |
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| Hi Anna,
It's nice to be back. I'm actually back in China now so I thought I should do something in Hanyu. I've changed the piece as you suggested but dropped a couple of other characters to maintain line length (I do like symmetry). with kind regards Colin |
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| 主题: 看病最好 |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 6 阅读: 8023 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期二 四月 10, 2007 7:14 am 主题: 看病最好 |
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机上外星人的飞船 我突然病了 所以请求咨询医生 他们说呆呆 但是可以咨询兽医 Hi folks, sorry to be away for so long. This little piece started life as a piece of micro fiction and is currently in print in the Leaf Books Anthology, The Final Theory and Other Stories (UK). I thought it might be fun to try it in Hanyu. Here’s the English version: I took ill on the alien transport and asked to see the doctor. "Don't be silly," they said, "but you can see the veterinarian." With kind regards Colin |
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| 主题: 恬静滇池 (修改了) Peaceful Dianchi (revised) |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 4 阅读: 6840 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期日 七月 09, 2006 11:12 pm 主题: 恬静滇池 Peaceful Dianchi |
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| 可以不可以?
恬静滇池 恬静老滇池 风筝究青天 甚至鸟可弛 多久在今天 Peaceful old Dianchi Lake. Kites explore a clear blue sky. So even birds may take a break. How long can this day last? |
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| 主题: 恬静滇池 (修改了) Peaceful Dianchi (revised) |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 4 阅读: 6840 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期六 七月 08, 2006 8:01 pm 主题: 恬静滇池 (修改了) Peaceful Dianchi (revised) |
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谢谢星子! 我要再试! 克林 |
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| 主题: 恬静滇池 (修改了) Peaceful Dianchi (revised) |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 4 阅读: 6840 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期六 七月 08, 2006 9:26 am 主题: 恬静滇池 (修改了) Peaceful Dianchi (revised) |
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| 恬静的云南
很有风今天 风筝究青天 舟游于滇池 有游鱼溅开 Peaceful Yunnan. Now the wind is high kites explore the sky. Boats explore Dianchi fish are splashing too. |
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| 主题: How can you become beautiful? (My tonight's speech) |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 7 阅读: 5809 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期四 六月 01, 2006 4:29 am 主题: How can you become beautiful? (My tonight's speech) |
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| Well spoken! | ||||
| 主题: Be careful of some Poetry web site |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 8 阅读: 12960 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期日 五月 14, 2006 6:59 pm 主题: Be careful of some Poetry web site |
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| I like the saying, 'If it seems too good to be true，then it is too good to be true.'
Take care out there! regards Colin 克林 |
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| 主题: Dianchi Lake |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 7 阅读: 12047 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期日 二月 20, 2005 5:42 am 主题: Dianchi Lake |
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| Hi Qiu Ye,
Thank you for your kind words and thank you for helping with my poem. Much appreciated! Colin |
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| 主题: Dianchi Lake |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 7 阅读: 12047 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期五 二月 18, 2005 8:03 pm 主题: Dianchi Lake |
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Hi Anna, Thank you so much for your help. I'm delighted to have a real Chinese version. with kind regards Colin |
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| 主题: Dianchi Lake |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 7 阅读: 12047 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期三 二月 16, 2005 9:25 pm 主题: Dianchi Lake |
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| I've tried a translation:
滇池 造化的宝贝滇池 活着水造化的血 恒久风吹上水池 滇池在水的世界 活着水造化的血 内陆在海中日落 滇池在水的世界 风的长歌和日落 内陆在海中日落 恒久风吹上水池 风的长歌和日落 造化的宝贝滇池 I should welcome any feedback. with kind regards Colin |
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| 主题: Dianchi Lake |
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| Colin Campbell 回响: 7 阅读: 12047 |
论坛: English Garden 发表于: 星期二 二月 15, 2005 11:21 pm 主题: Dianchi Lake |
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Hi Anna, I like you choice of words better and I've revised the pantoum. I've been busy developing a new personal website so I've not been writing much new or posting for a while. I'll sent you an invition to view when it's ready. with kind regards Colin |
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